/lit/ - Literature

Suggest some incel books. I need to identify myself somehow.

>>22545840
>write shit characters intentionally so that you're praised for making them slightly less shit later

Where the do I publish poetry that isn't pozzed beyond belief?

Everywhere I look, it's all the same "le immigrant experience" shit.

>>22229002
this is coming from a really dark place

Hello I could use some constructive criticism, especially the story itself and themes

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zWm0eDWN49u_0gAdsnuvIC4jME-S27uRBL6DdAm-PmM/edit?usp=drivesdk

>>22210548
Oh yeah? well if you're so smart lets see you give an analysis of this film treatment:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GxHTajL5wDvQhOdTtszHZtcPVh2DUyzN1SKlRbBmP78/edit?usp=drivesdk

>>22172390
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I wrote this outline as a film treatment. Chances of getting optioned are near zero given the subject matter, but I might try to make a screenplay and submit it anyway if only as a learning experience. Otherwise, there's always novelization.


The entire story hit me like a lightning bolt while I was in the hospital and I wrote the whole thing in a single explosive siting. I think I've struck gold in terms of story and suspense and narrative drive, but it's hard to self evaluate when something comes to you so suddenly. I could really use and appreciate some feed back...

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GxHTajL5wDvQhOdTtszHZtcPVh2DUyzN1SKlRbBmP78/edit?usp=drivesdk