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Well, I got a second part on first draft now. I welcome feedback on both parts.

Crimson Dawn
> Prohibition Era, Crime, Supernatural, Action, Thriller

Crimson Dawn Part 1
https://files.catbox.moe/lcpepf.pdf
> 6,511 Words
> ~25 min read

Crimson Dawn Part 2
https://files.catbox.moe/z6j6v5.pdf
> 7,256 words
> ~30 min read

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New draft. Cut it down by nearly five hundred words. Cleaned it up.

> Crimson Dawn Part 1
> Prohibition era, Crime, Supernatural, Action, Suspense
> 6,511 words
> ~25 min read
https://files.catbox.moe/lcpepf.pdf

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>>22388479
Update. This is a ~7k word sequence that serves as the first of twelve parts. Should take about a half hour to read. I hope you enjoy it and want to read more. I want constructive criticism and feedback if you have anything to offer.

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