/lit/ - Literature

>>21437636
When writing, the focus, should be on the sensations felt by the two, and their inner monologues and thoughts during the act.
Many other forms of media are capable of displaying the physical act of sex with far more clarity than writing.
Physically describing it play-by-play is also difficult, owing to their only being so many synonyms for penis, vagina, and breasts, and a lot of them being exceedingly crude. One can attempt to convey meaning through metaphors and other such techniques, but that can often come off as too flowery and whimsical.
Where writing succeeds in allowing you to describe the things which each side is feeling and how they are feeling pleasured and enjoying the act. Leaving the physical aspects somewhat vague can also allow the reader to insert their own preferred elements into the events.
Also, you're writing a porn novel, so the consumer base is going to be women. Take that into account when considering how you write it up

Any good enemies to lovers fantasy? Preferably with erotica and GRI approved.

>>20570948
>Nietzschean ressentiment
I cringed out of my skin.

>read first and middle chapter only
>get the gist of it and don't miss out on anything since books are 90% filler and never have good endings
Name one thing wrong with this strategy.