/lit/ - Literature

At first I thought of making it two altenrating stories one with the rival who has the doll and the yakuza boss searching for the doll trying to stop his secret from being exposed but I think I'll just have it focus on the Yakuza boss's desscent into paranoia and madness since this is far more fun to write

Not confident in how I'm using blade to the heart/ struck like a blade it feels too similar and repetitive but otherwise I don't think it is written too badly trying to edge more into my MC's growing paranoia now after he has discovered someone has taken his doll and how it will affect his daily life/reputation I'm going to rework those top two paragraphs though and see what I can come up with