/lit/ - Literature

>>22398004
Okay, I finished the first book last night. The latter 2/3 WERE better. But then I start the second book and it doesn't start off from the end of the first. That doesn't really make sense from the perspective of how and why the book is being written in universe, but beyond that the transition is done poorly. It's not a switch to the perspective of another and then a return to our protagonist where he was(which was a dramatic scene where he killed a man.), but it remains the perspective of our protagonist, and the mention of facts and names which have not previously been introduced. It's as if a series of chapters existed between the last book and the start of this, and they were later cut out with little care.

I thought it might quickly explain things, but it doesn't. The first chapter continues to carry on as if you've read previous chapters of build up. I maintain that Gene Wolf is a fat retarded jew.

Can you find a more kino moment in fantasy?

The most kino scene in all literature.