/lit/ - Literature

>>23217778
Since you didn't bother reading what he wrote and keep yapping like a moody nigger why don't you explain to me what part of this excerpt is proper "prose" that "flows" well:
>Klaus stood above his desk, a man transfixed, a sentry to each second past with utter, abject clarity; and in his state, he could not find the most immediate remedy to his current problem: no, not Frau Edel! she might as do well what she likes (there is no point in trying turn the younger generations from their folly); the concern most salient to Herr Klaus Tordwankel was the dire state of his direct environ: the papers' polluting presence. Klaus reasoned: they could be simply thrown away; but if they were discarded, in so doing would he lose entirely their utility ... unless he had in perfect working memory a recall of their contents; but he did not, and could not hope by ring of 0815 to have committed them to memory; as such, necessity would dictate that one—or, perhaps, all three—must be saved for Klaus and for, perhaps, posterity.
>>23217801
And while you're at it I'll also let you know that even if I bothered to discuss art or the technicalities of writing, like I have done so before in this general, I wouldn't do so with a crab bucket faggot and would rather "go jerk off to elves so I can write properly".
>>23213939
1000-2000 words, you get to pick the prompt/challenge/whatever the fuck but I'll have to write in an elf and a fighting scene for shits and giggles; surely you can write better than a genreCHAD, right?
Of course, if you don't accept my duel challenge you are an eternally btfo honorless faggot and my cock is bigger than yours.