/lit/ - Literature

>>20111030
Thank you so much for the kind words and the actionable feedback regarding the ending. I was attempting to show urgency/the narrators own uncertainty through brevity but it sounds like I went a bit overboard and can flesh it out the walk to the room/in her room scene some more.

And I deeply appreciate the typographical catches, I'll go back for a pass on the m dashes (didn't even know how to do them honestly, damn machines). I thought I did have punctuation in all the quotes but will review, let me know if there was a specific example I should be aware of.

>>20112005
>>20111520
Art of (soulless) Fiction mindset and
muh 3 Act Structure (which is an irrelevant distraction) gave me nothing but headaches - I'm 90% From Where you Dream team now with the exception of starting with a target tone and desired endstate as guiding stars.