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>> No.22549231 [View]
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Hey. I'm a bit of a newfag here but I decided to write some more serious work for once. So I wanted to ask:

How do I write a scene about debauchery and corrupted human nature without sounding like an edgelord or a fetish weirdo?

for context I'm trying to write a scene where a character whos been dead for a few decades comes back to life in a future where humanity has become connected to a world where they can all bend reality. But in an endless persuit of getting that high/their kicks, their desires become more and more extreme until it goes into some sodom/gammoragh/commoragh shit. And the protagonist is supposed to come out of it with PTSD or something.
I'm a little insecure about this part though because I'm worried it makes me come off as some edgefag or tryhard. Also this is for a college assignment and I've already committed to this outline. I guess there's some maybe room for change but still. What do you think?

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>>4911693


how can it be a spook when its reality?

checkmate atheists.

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