/lit/ - Literature

>>8233710
>At the core of a person there are things that made surviving easier.

I stopped reading there, and only after forcing myself to. Yes, your caption prejudiced me against you.

>curious as to exactly how unprofessional I come off, having literally no experience as a writer

Ugh, really?

Anyway, since I was going to post anyway, here's my work..

"You turn with time to face the void. Gusts of anxiety flee from its depths, chasing maternal warmth. Spleen chill becomes unbearable - look away. Turn back. No choice but to flip a coin and follow it; black coats vision. The scent of almonds on your fifth birthday floats from the tunnel entrance. Each pool you pass evaporates under your gaze; narcissism is futile, ever-tempting. There is no time. Ahead, again, your prospects beckon. Immaterial, volatile, built from marble – that is all you know. They crumble upon arrival, whispering that there are two ways. Echoes of the avalanche set time rumbling. Quick, catch up!"