/lit/ - Literature

>>19710443
Why are you coming to fucking 4chan for constructive feedback? Even paying beta readers from goodreads $5 is more than anything this place can manage. No one comes here for proper criticism nor should they hope to find something akin to a writing group. This place has been the single worst place to ask readers what is lacking or needs work, as they won’t even bother telling you. I have people on discord that will do it far better and it wouldn’t compromise my identity nor the ability to publish my work. I come here to SNEED instead.

I hate women. I want to fuck women all the time. I hate women. I want to fuck....I... hate....AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

>>14037190
Wow imagine doing unspeakable things on her face lmao haha us boys amirite?

>reminder to make a greentext draft
>write it out as if you were going to post it here in a series of posts
>if your story can't be parsed into greentext and deliver the same message then your structure and/or plot sucks

>>12859697
To display their power and influence over the men in the room and potencially get even more out of it.
Just fucking hit her in the head with the heaviest book you can find and fuck her ass with pure hatred and cum on her eyes and hair. After that pull her by the hair and drag her out of the library.
That's how you get laid. Fuck these hoes, if they want to temp the dick so much they might aswell recieve it by brute force.