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Based.
>>21567088
>of a
Seems a bit redundant to me. Also feels bad in terms of rhythm.
Second stanza has a nice ring to it.
Third stanza could use some work and I'm not sure what it is talking about really, beyond art.
Fourth stanza has iffy rhythm.
Fifth stanza is cool.
Last one seems to drop the ball or lose the plot a bit.

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