/lit/ - Literature

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also I want to expand upon the Beastmen as well, right now they just seem like a generic 'monster' and Barbarian stand-in, tbh I stole their general look from Warhammer, even if I changed up the reasoning as to why they exist.

idk if it makes sense for them to be so uniformly animal-like as they are now, but then just random generic mutants isn't as exciting.

I'd like to expand the conflict beyond merely scavengers and the beastmen as some point to include wider politics and other 'abomination' type deals as well as superior beings with 'perfected' genetics.
the main point of the story is to sort of sing the praises of Humanity unaltered

I've also thought about changing up the begining of the story to focus more on a sort of 'Werewolf Hunt' like the Beast of Gévaudan then decent into the conflict with the beastman tribe