/lit/ - Literature

https://pastebin.com/wfFXNgwn

So I've been working on the prologue a bit

People said it wasn't explicitly clear enough that the plan is for the father to pretend to leave, lure out the bandits, then return once they revealed themselves.

I also changed the name of the human language from "common" to "the trade tongue" or "trade language" since it would be what people use for trade.

also I drew a rough idea of how I intended the lungmarians to look.

forgive the shitty drawing skills I'm still hardcore /beg/