/lit/ - Literature

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Hi /sffg/, I hope you won't mind I present you a little work of mine : an interactive space opera fiction.

Tbh it's a thing I wrote a long time ago, and I found it back this year, and I thought it would be fun to made it into an interactive narrated story. The concept is quite simple, each episode presents a decisive choice, and depending on the results of the poll, I publish the next episode few days later. Since it's a branched story, every choice will be explored in time, to reveal the plot.

As for the plot itself, I don't want to say too much, but it take inspiration as much into classical space opera fictions as well as some lovecraftian elements. The story is fully narrated in french, but I've put english subtitles.

Check out the first episode, and if you like it, watch the others ! For now, only three have been published, I will probably publish the fourth one during the week. Hope my english subtitles are okay :

https://youtu.be/rAynbc19Bxo?feature=shared

Hi /lit/, I just launched my narrated interactive space opera fiction and I would like to have reviews on the quality of the english writing/subs.

I've writed the whole story in french, my mother tongue. If I'm confident about the quality of the writing in french, I'm really not about the english translation I've made of it. I can speak english, but since it's not my mother tongue, I can't judge the style of the writing like I would for french.

Also, to add some context, this will be a space opera story with an interactive element, the votes deciding how the branched story goes on...

Please check it out, and let me know what you think of it :

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rAynbc19Bxo