/lit/ - Literature

>>22895500
https://pastebin.com/AAzJMtG2

Here ya' go, anon. An excerpt from page 131. Probably tied for most violent part with the climax of 'Little Lin-Kim the Heartbreaker'.

It's not super bad, I know. I do think it might turn off a few publishers though.

>>22446302
Thank you so much, anon! You certainly seem to know your stuff!

In light of your wonderful suggestions thus far, I proffer one last question: what would you recommend as the best way to get honest feedback on your work? I am in a bit of a pickle because I am a genteel fellow, and I can't show my novel to many people I know, because it would probably upset them (some of it is pretty gruesome by normie standards). What's more, I remain pretty unsure about the quality/originality of my work. Would you say 'BookSirens' is the best way to get honest, discriminating feedback in a timely manner?

Thanks for your time anon.

(P.S, that penguin image is a favourite of mine. On my PC, I have him saved as 'Ibn-al-Penguin').