/lit/ - Literature

What would you guys rather read as an excerpt for my novel (whatever has the most votes I'll post. Either in this thread or the next one)

>18 year old girl has to solve a surreal puzzle revolving around fast clouds, an upside down waterfall, and an abyss with no name. While everything around her gets worse and worse. Horror surrealism

>A violent and very stupid brawl occurs in an old-school trucker diner. That started because a racist trucker and a janitor (who is like a mix of Mike Tyson and Mr. Rodgers) don't want to clean a dirty bathroom. This section has the feel of a metaphysical character examination and a looney tunes cartoon