/lit/ - Literature

>>15885159
>Letting the worker get back to his work
Should be
>Letting the worker return to his duty
To harken back to the soldiering quip

I like how you set up two characters that are polar opposites; you have a man who chooses to not be burdened with anything other than his garden(even only if a little) and a boy who is very concerned with his career and the going ons of the current time(because he'd rather not end up as another body in some far slung war)
>>15882941
Here's what I've got in regards to a particular battle scene I've got stuck in my head. I wish to write a SciFi fantasy in which most of the dialogue is Anglish, and it features a hash of languages that could be Germanic if a great migration had occurred among planetary bodies instead of the countries we know of today. This has a battle poem I'm working on, and I still have to think of the dialogue that leads up to it. This particular unit is suffering tremendous losses and a certain character(who was thought to have died in battle) awakes and his first instinct is drawn upon the flag he swore fealty towards; this poem is his rallying cry
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