/lit/ - Literature

It's a shitty first draft, which is why it's as bad as Waldun. There isn't much to work with. It's an edit as much as it is a rewrite. We're onboarding loads of /lit/izens to clean it up and shitpost it up later. You'll see, you'll all see.

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Easily. This is comparable to Elliot's 'The Waste Land.'

>Trips to where few have been
>Out of thin air, upon high winds
>Rites begin when the sun descends
>Have felt what few will ever know
>Have seen the truth beneath the glow
>Of the ebb and flow, where the roots of all mysteries grow
>I am below, so far below the bottom line
>Transmitting live, transmissions rise
>From the depths out of controlled by
>Suspended glance of an unblinking eyes
>Imminent gaze cast 'pon the path that winds
>'Pon the path I find, and claim as mine
>To ride the waves of unrest
>Made to make me shine as a testament
>To why the ways of the blind will never get
>Shit but shanked by my disrespect
>Dismiss this life, worship death
>Cold blood night of serpent's breath
>Exhaled like spells from the endlessness
>In the bottomless wells of emptiness
>Channeled to invoke what we represent
>Secret order, elitist horde of creeping fire, seizing power
>Riders of the lupus hour
>>Eye on palm, time is gone
>Moonlight drawn, fly till dawn
>Sacrifice to rise beyond
>Deep inside the violent calm of the coming storm
>In blood sworn to glorify and for life adorn
>With all that dies to become unborn
>(God is watching, God is watching)

(Stefan "MC Ride" Burnett, Beware, 2011)