/lit/ - Literature

>>23364440
>premise just wasn't interesting to me
Did you find the excitement lacking or just the premise and exposition boring?
>The weeb dialogue and eight grade syndrome
Well at least I know the intended effect happend lol. I get if you find the main character off putting and weird that was sorta my intention with him. An average loser put into an unfair and massive world.
>idk just seemed out of place to me
As in the tone of the characters clashed with the plot or did the vibe feel off? Could you explain a bit more please?
>which was why I didn't bother responding in the first place
I appreciate any kind of feedback. Even your short comments mean alot to me. At least I know it's just not your cup of tea instead of being unreadable babble.