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Unequivocal

I'm a Salazarist. Sometimes I call myself a national syndicalist.
Populism is just raw democracy. Honestly even after all of these years and all of these fucking idiots who have paraded its cause, I'm still a virulent populist. I honestly believe what the whole Western world needs is unthinking, emotional, violent populism. No holds barred, let it overflow.
It's probably dead. I think the Capitol Hill incident was a premature ejaculation, and now America will go back to sleep again. Maybe forever. But I think we were close there for a moment, a second.

I will begin by saying I'm >>14456469 and >>14453915 (and drunk again). You're free to decide whether I'm qualified to offer advice based on that excerpt.
>>14453928
Nit pick: the more contemporary spelling is "unnamable" Otherwise, punctuation is very awkward, especially between first and second sentence. Otherwise I found the imagery very good (I may be biased as the son of a neuroscientist) and the poetry of the language was excellent
>>14454270
Maybe too short to make a full assessment. I'll say I was a bit confused trying to imagine the context, since an older man approaching a younger and asking if he's looking for a suit- it's impossible to see anything other than a department store. I'm assuming that was sort of your point, but I don't understand why a man would open with that question at a party. Besides that it was well written.
>>14457494
Not sure if I understood the opening metaphor of a homogeneous crowd resembling a flowing river. Punctuation between "6 feet nigh" and "with his family" definitely needs revising. May be an unreasonable criticism but I don't know how Tim is able to tell the son has an unhealthy obsession with himself. "The finest cloth" is quite an archaic way of speaking, but nigh 6 foot is as well, so I'm assuming it's intentional. I'm assuming the rest of the piece explains the why the second half of your passage is so political. I liked it.

>>13643554
>>13643532
Good to see a based Catholic-poster spreading truth.

I've been writing a book and the 30 first pages are all just an introduction detailing who is who and the family members, so far there being no dialogue at all. Are books without dialogue boring?

>>13444530
Kek, I think he's more based than Barron but I like them both.

Don't take NEETzsche seriously.

Fools professing themselves to be wise. Pay them no mind, my son. Because the foolishness of God is wiser than men; and the weakness of God is stronger than men. Now go in peace and remember, /sci/ has the highest percentage of reddit users of any board.

>>13401819
Yeah and? How does that excuse 228 Days on the Greeks and Romans and finding nothing of value

>>13394145
You're a disgusting creep and backlash will be hell

Chemical or physical castration and living the rest of your life as a penitent warning others.

>>13340320
St. Alphonsus

St Cardinal Bellarmine

>>13003723
>>13003756
>/lit/ in charge of the Church

>>12907943
That isn't him obviously. The file name is different.
Regardless, that creepshot guy is a basket case and is certainly not based. And by basket case, I literally mean mentally ill. This waiting room of a a psychiatrist's office. Hopefully someone recognizes it and alerts the clinic in question. The staff could get a rough idea of who took the picture based on that patient, and could ascertain the exact moment picture was taken and narrow it down to a probable candidate. You can get a rough idea of which phone was used to take the image even.The guy is probably is a sex offender, there on court order, something like this could send him back to prison where he belongs. If he isn't, this should serve as evidence to involuntarily commit him. We need to bring back insane asylums for people like him.