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Anonymous Sat Aug 27 01:01:08 2022 No.20901297 [View]
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>>20900775
Here you are. This is the story I submitted a few weeks ago. Like I said before here >>20900082
I'm mainly looking for feedback on how the story makes you feel (the style, ideas, characters &c) rather than a prescription of how to fix it but any feedback will probably help me. For now, it is what it is. There were a number of parts where I wanted to elaborate in the scenes but it was running 5600 words so I tried to get to the point.

It's an intro to the novel I'm working on which is maybe 3 months out from being "done" though I don't know when it will be published. Would you like to know what happens to Claud and Phoebe?

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