/lit/ - Literature

>>20267147
As always, I found it well-written and compelling.
I especially appreciate your skill with similes and metaphors...I'm still not very good with those.

I only have one other comment, and feel free to ignore it...previously you posted drawings of your protagonist. And I know tastes in women vary widely. But I was expecting a diabolical temptress to look less like a healthy yoga nut. Picrel is closer to what I was imagining, i.e. more voluptuous, and with more of a "come hither" look than a friendly one. You don't have to keep the red hair, either. Like I said, feel free to ignore this.