/lit/ - Literature

Bog Brother, &amp 012

>>20827678
Any chance you wrote pic related (Bog Brother)? I liked it.

The Bog Brother, &amp issue 012. QRD: tunnels, peanut-heads, galoshes, choirs.

>>20794643
Someone say something about Void because I liked it a lot.

>>20795905
Being verbose isn't a good thing, and if the author doesn't have a good handle on the language he uses it's going to detract from the story. The language should serve a purpose. Since anon was on about Bones of the City, I'll say I found it interesting, but the writing can be tough to get through. (The author chimed in last thread and said he's writing "meandering, maximalist piece of experimental fiction", which I'm assuming Bones is a sample of.) He shoots for something abstract without a strictly coherent narrative, and the verbosity on top of that makes it incoherent at times.