/lit/ - Literature

Very minimal editing, written sort of off the cuff this afternoon to give a starting point for some of my ideas. I feel like my prose is embarrassingly bad any time I try to write dialogue or a specific scene. The opening of the Brothers Karamazov is my favorite type of tone, just disconnected narration and family history. You necessarily have to show these close-up, personal scenes though.

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This is really good, beautiful language and rhythm. I love this