/lit/ - Literature

>>21961332
I like it.
I have no real criticisms to give.
As for how she might get her powers, she decides to try spending the night outside in her rebellion, and ends up in a clearing of the homeless by private police, ends up as an experiment.
Perhaps she could even go back to her parents once the mix up is realized, showing that it is relatively normal for such a thing to happen, and as she doesn't have a reaction at first, they she doesn't end up as company property.
I gotta say, I love the description of the swat or whatever those guys are.
Armor in the same vein as this gets my hard.