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you did sense of smell in a very good way

it's something that everyone can relate to (if you can't relate to this.... you might be Zareth)

there are some minor issues: a weird "He saw him..." near the climax. the second half of the first paragraph doesn't flow. minor stuff, easily sorted.

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