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Anonymous Mon Nov 27 01:05:44 2017 No.10320322 [View]
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Smut:

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Read the work before reading my questions because I don't want to preemptively bend criticism

Was it okay that I didn't describe their appearances too much? Did any of the details feel revisionary when they popped up? As in, did you ever see anything pop up and then have to go back and add the detail at some earlier point? Not that this is my only worry.

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