/lit/ - Literature

what do you guys think about this intro to a short story im writing.


In dreamland, any boundary can be overcome with the divine power of the
mind.
A place where nothingness contains something and something could be
anything, where anything contains nothing and nothing is the something
you have searched for all along.

I lay here a man, flesh. blood and guts organized into this supreme
vessel. Mind distanced from this mysterious vessel which carries it.
They say to me 'wake up, wake up already please dad.' but who they are I
do not know, sounds from an outward darkness deceiving and luring me
back into a world of insanity I wish not return. 'sir, you've been in an
accident. You have been blinded from the accident and you are paralyzed
from your neck down', there we go again... The voices from withing the
darkness filling my world with the the most peculiar tinge of self
abominating slander. I know I am not paralyzed for I can walk, run, fly
and swim unlike any others in my land.