/lit/ - Literature

>>2995793
>>2995818
My cheeks blossomed like a spanked spring rose.

>>2995835
>>2995902
I swooned as I did when m'lady crushed my earthly organs with her pale full moon.

Please post more vivacious verses

“Suntan lotion makes them all sticky,”
But her cheeks were red from radiation
She was a bombshell, native to Bikini,
For which no missionary applied protection.

I liked it.

Have you heard Music for the Quiet Hour by Shackleton OP? One track is built around Vengeance Tenfold reading a letter he sent to his granddaughter living in the year 2065. Your piece kind of reminds me of it, in concept more so than content.

>>2960613
I like your work.
>even the naval cavity

I tend not to enjoy very matter of fact writing, but I think it matched the sort of detached tone you used for your story very well and added to the sexual flavor. It feels very whimsical.

I'm actually working on writing sexy stuff more whimsically, but it's difficult when I'm a person who has to rationalize everything because my tastes tend to be more fringe. Sexuality doesn't work that way, it doesn't explain or try to rationalize itself, any attempt at rationalization only proves reductive. That's how I want to write (in general not just with erotica), not having to explain things, merely pose stimulating questions for reader to answer. It seems you're able to do this well without really trying.

>>2766202
Think you could give my paragraph
>>2764990
Some scathing criticism too?