/lit/ - Literature

>>11712993
I might read it.

>born the day after my brothers birthday
>calls me the worst present hes received
>mom starts binge drinking when I was two
>dad constantly gone on work meetings across the country, seldom ever home
>find out hes been cheating on my mum, denies it to this day
>showed interest in sports, but parents didn't want to invest their time in something I was good at
>brother never really speaks to me, but constant bullying
>make friends in school, but every year they leave or transfer to a different school
>spend a lot of recesses alone
>poor academically, but bright and have interests in sports, drama and literature
>called a 'fag' for the first time at age 8 by an adult
>held back a grade because teacher didn't teach us multiplication
>have constant stomach issues
>eventually have established group of friends but their interests are all video games and manga and I didn't really care for that
>brother stops talking to me, my dad and mom for 12 years
>teachers in high school publicly shame me, one calls me "useless" and thus becomes my nickname throughout high school
>still struggle academically but just scrape by through university
>work part time jobs wherein managers either threaten me, or straight up try to be violent towards me
>brother comes back out of the blue expecting everything to be fine
>quit part time jobs hoping to find a fulfilling career, but now been unemployed for a year and a half
>brother tries to convince me to come out to the West Coast, claiming he was going to buy a shoe-shop and we could co-manage it
>tell him I don't have enough money to do support myself out there yet
>tells me to kill myself and that I'll always be useless
>three weeks later he has a mental breakdown from consuming magic mushrooms and cannabis every day for 6 months and ends up in hospital
>parents go visit him
>I don't
>still can't find a job here, not even a barista job.

>>9687931
Because Spencer is a moron, regardless of his political affiliation. Once Zizek goes deep, Spencer will no doubt start calling him a globalist, shill or cuck

>>9185985

How can it be a sjw book when it portrays identity out of inclussion politics and formulates the possibility of national pride??? The shrewdness of politically opiniated people (in both poles of the spectrum) really is annoying.

>It is the story of five University of Toronto senior law and medical students, who are drawn into the 'first world of the Tapestry' by the mage Loren Silvercloak.

This sounds fucking cancerous.

How can I improve my writing?
(Sentence structure, grammar, ex)

What are some things that you do or critique when you write?