/lit/ - Literature

>>22452698
>Past pretense
I am naturally inclined to write third person past but I wanted to challenge myself to write first person present as that is the romance novel meta. I caught myself slipping into past pretense often and fixed it but I guess I didn't catch them all.
>Self conflicting narration
After having an extensive history with women, I have intimate knowledge of their mind. Women are fickle creatures that rarely reveal what they are actually thinking and will often act or say things that are the opposite of what they actually intend. It's on par with my protagonist who is a self centered and selfish woman. That is if I correctly understood what you meant by self conflicting narration. Thanks anon!
>>22452865
Come on anon it's a neat premise. I will only get better at writing. I do appreciate your gatekeeping though we need more gatekeepers. Thanks brother