/lit/ - Literature

I am rp with a girl from reddit
Can you pls check my text and make it a little bit better

>Dima felt the blood drained from this face, he became sick and dizzy. The axe fell from his hand as his legs gave out and he sank to the floor. "He just cut her arm off and it grew back. I definitely lost my mind." Dima slowly and cautiously held out his hand toward the limb, like it could jump and grab his neck again, then touched it with his index finger and very quickly pulled it back. The skin was smooth and cold, and under the skin laid thick muscles, which made the woman so strong. No, it was not a figment of his imagination, not an illusion, not some sick joke, it was all real.

>Several minutes he was sitting on the floor, rubbing his face trying to get over his shock. After he calmed down a little he looked at the women who was peacefully washing her in his bathtub as if nothing had happened. In spite of his state, he couldn't help but notice the woman's beautiful body. He had never seen a naked woman before, let alone in his own house. The girls had never had an interest in the shy, lonely guy who preferred spending time catching crickets and dragonflies for his gecko, rather than drinking and putting his hands on drunk girls at parties. The only time he got a kiss, was in 8th grade, when a classmate kissed on his cheek in gratitude for doing homework for her. After he catched her eye, he immediately looked away in confusion. She had just tried to kill him, but he still felt awkward seeing her naked.

>Dima didn't know what to do. He was so tired and exhausted, he had no strength to run and call the police. And it probably won't work, because she'd probably get to him in a jump and break his neck. He was sitting there quietly awaiting his fate.

it took me more than 2 hours to write that