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>> No.20558335 [View]
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Can I get an extra set or two of eyes on this poem please?

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There are a couple lines here I'm still wrestling with (kudzu "ever/overhang'd," limbless in orchards, reconstituted), but I'm actually pretty happy with the core of this poem. Thoughts?

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