/lit/ - Literature

>>20300244
>calling a spec script written before the joker movie came out "fanfiction"

>>20192980
>accusing the kgb of being nazis

and you tell us to take meds

I've edited up to page 42. Should finish by today. I believe my changes are a serious improvement. Reconsider your target audience and whether or not to use bold and say "fucking," the n-word, etc. You can say "faggot," since some gays don't consider it pejorative. When your subject is already controversial, you should make your style as accessible and PG-13 as possible. I need to go buy more coffee. Gang Weed out

>>19806184

>>19743900
bless you, fellow gamer

>>19649656
I think the ending scene on the bus is brilliant, especially the final page.

Unfortunately the script is unfilmable because the entire conflict is the protagonist versus his desire to say the N-word and we don't have the rights to Joker. I tried to follow Nolan Batman canon as closely as possible.

A little more polish and it could be a PG-13 short film on Netflix, but they would probably make all of the actors Haitian and fuck up the Christian symbolism