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a month ago i fielded ideas for a shonen manga for a contest and you guys helped me out a lot so I'm asking for one last favor:

I have two characters now, an engineer rabbit and the protagonist.

they fix the protags ship together but now i need a motive/story that makes sense as to why the rabbit is now evil and wants to fight and kill the protagonist.

can someone give me a good reason as to why the (now transformed and evil) rabbit would want to kill the protagonist and prevent her from leaving the planet on the ship they both just fixed?

all i know is the bunny is going to turn ripped
all of which is happening during the black hole approaching and tearing the landscape up (they have like 10 minutes)

all i have is that the rabbit knows the protags name without her telling him which freaks her out and also that she's actually a ????

>a fugitive? a former mob member ?? idk!!!

Does he want to eat her? does he want revenge? is there not enough fuel to get both of them off the planet in time?

i just want him to explain his motive and then fight her, beat her up, and then die because she secretly turns on the cannons on the now fixed ship in time.

she blasts off barely and yadda yadda END CHAPTER 1

I will post the pages i have done so you guys can see what I've done doing since last month.

I also don't mind if you critique what I have, just bear in mind this all for a contest due on september 1st so I'm just trying to finish these last couple pages of fight scenes over the course of the next seven days.

(cover/15 pages)