/lit/ - Literature

Anonymous Sun May 23 06:24:10 2021 No.18300541 [View]
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>https://pastebin.com/EEQAcDXq
This is the second draft of a short story I've been working on for a bit. I'd love some feedback in whatever form. Pastebin sucks for formatting so picrel is the most significant usage of italics. I'm mostly interested in whether or not the "twist" comes through well enough, but anything is welcome.
>>18300480
I'll give it a read through and post below.

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