/lit/ - Literature

love this one.

>>2740560
... I think I'll note down your entire post somewhere. Thank you!

>>2738156
Well, thank you I guess. For now, another bump.

This is actually frustrating for me, since I've got a lot of idea, I enjoy writing, but I still have a really academic style. Any advice?

>>2738122
Touché. This is basically my main problem. I've been told that quite a lot already. But I honestly feel that it is currently my style... What can I do about this?

>>2738017
Maybe he was some kind of meta-troll from the 5th dimension. We'll never know.

Wait what? Why did you delete all your posts? D:

>>2736348
I guess Edison would be possessed by Nyarlathotep.

>>2736255
Don't be mean with the guy, we should encourage him.

Are you talking about Twilight or about my short story here?

>>2736254
>I could write about that

I'll bump with a bit of epicness.

>>2734881
Got it!

>>2734835
I don't know if I could hope for a more positive review on this board, thanks!

It's intersting that you didn't really like the first half of the 2nd page, since I didn't like it a lot myself... I didn't know how to turn my narration for that part and it must feel like it.

Here you go! It was about a young adventurous man lost in a cave somewhere in South America in the 1890s, put in a sticky situation with a crowd of native.

http://blog.letudiant.fr/concours-de-nouvelles-2012/2012/05/16/au-bord-du-gouffre/

>>2734822
Feels good to be at least better than Twilight man. Have a picture.

>>2734822
>You said that at 13:00.
I don't know about you, but it's still early for me at this time of the year ahah. Total nerd here, and I got my exam last week and am going to work in August. So for now I'm writting stuff, and just chilling.
>Of men and strange colored clothing?
Their clothing is strange and colored yep.

>>2734814
Oh, nice to meet you again so soon then, whoever you were.

I actually won the May selection last time. And I came back for the June one, with a twice as long twice as good short story! I really wanted to exercise my imagination on this contest's constraints, which are the same as last time (imposed beginning and ending, and the adventure as a theme).

Hm and to show you my goodwill I will also answer any question French (literature or not) related or regarding my own career as a wannabe writer.

Hu I just noticed I repeted an entire sentence. It's quite early in the morning here too.