/lit/ - Literature

>>7524786
>Something has been eating me up at night, little house hold critters.
This is not how to use the comma.
>>7523410
As another anon said, it requires focus. While you are writing, think about why you are writing; think about what your writing means to you, what it means to others. While this isn't required for good writing, I find that it provides clarity and coherence; helps with coherence, cohesiveness.

>>7526313
The sentences are a little clunky and your punctuation is questionable.

For one, I would put more thought into your punctuation. Colons, commas, semicolons, periods, and dashes all have, in a way, their own personality, and you need to consider them and choose which one to use accordingly. When you string independent clauses together with commas, you create a frantic and rushed feeling which does seem to match what is happening.

For two, you should play around with your sentence structure and length more. Think about how one sentence is connected to the next.

For three, you really need to think about the words you are using—how they act and sound in context.

>>7526261
All Gass is good Gass, godless ass.

>>7526283
This Gass will soothe your soul. Please post Gass now.

>>7526260
>>7526263
>>7526272
This is not Gass. Please refrain from posting content not related to Gass.

>>7526232
This is now a Gass thread. Post anything and everything Gass related.

>>7526233
Too bad Gass is better than everyone you just listed.

>>7526205
Skip it and read The Tunnel by William Gass.

>>7526186
>he thinks it isn't
>he thinks Ezra Pound wasn't one of the most influential figures of the modernist movement

>>7525495
That's not The Tunnel, so, no, you did not do good.

>>7526077