/lit/ - Literature

>>3836726
Some people might just b trying to b deep in holding the belief thier ccreations have a life of thier own and that might help make them more believable and relate-able.
I fear tho that many authors blend the line of illusion and mystification into total delusion seeing their characters as more real then the people around them and the false relationships they portray as unshakeable foundations of the universe they create ,and possibly isolate themselves in.

>>3837684
going postal was one of my fav's its a stand alone so its a good starter.
you don't need alot of knowledge about the history of discworld terry is good at explaining what little info u need

>>3817007
OKay so i still liked it
i would read the adventures of edric, not so much anyone else but maybe the dragonborn
The elves were unique i liked them and the gore of the magic was really neat
Your descriptions were good i found the dancing models and tendrils of black fire very good visuals
I think the story ended a little premature but it was a good place to pause if you have a second chapter and are intending to explain why the black fire stopped
All the dialogue was perfect it was funny believable and none of it was generic or stereotypical

>>3817007
hey manmi am the one doing the reading so stop complaining i got 90 lines left i will speed through it for you and
"If there was a god of apathy I don't think they would even take time to give him due."
Is better then anything i have read in any other fantasy story

>>3816964
ok i am a dick but if u
>about to die of brain cancer the next day
then this would probably be the best walk of your life
are you the same writer
>>3816760
>>3816691
>>3816559

>>3816945
okay i promise to finish it tonight and write a comment hear it might take me some time but stay tuned

>>3816950
flowering might not be the right word its just the word i used to explaining the Blooming Bud process

>>3816840
i liked it i wanted more dialogue but its good to see it was building to this conversation

>>3816812
>could never reach
i just dont know what your saying here
>enigma to everyone except himself
that's just unnecessary remember less is more
>During the day
just remove the second time u use it

>>3816911
i am no expert but male plants produce no actual THC. Female plants produce more thc when separated from males because there is no pollination and thus no seeds its also so the energy and nutrients that would be spent on procreation are turned to flowering. its 1 reason why really good bud has no seeds and shit weed has plenty(beyond the genetics of different strains)

>>3816665
I haven't read all of it but i found it amusing i know a bit about D&D so a bunch of the words like teifling and such didn't throw me off like it might for others i am really tired and saved the story to read later but i wont be finishing tonight i am sure. There was a lot of humor and that made everything feel more real it was good and i definitely expect to read something u publish in the future

>>3816852
I really like it the people felt real i could relate to the relationship and the book shopping was very well described and forced me into nostalgia.
But what the fuck is chocolate winters? ice cream? are u some kind of Canadian or god forbid a euro?

>>3816825
>Is there anyway for me to make this all a bit clearer and more comprehensible?
well i would separate the issues but i get why u wouldn't. I like the fact that femininity is a major theme in the plant i think if the title was more clearly something to do with femininity it would be easier to get.
>Ovaries
LOL i was like racking my brain what does an abdomen have to do with weed. is it like a narrative from mother earth? but now i get it alot of stuff i was like ok dont get it but sounds good now i am like OH its a SHE lol

>>3816811
lol i was thinking this exact thing this entire time i was going to sleep but i cant tear my eyes from 4chan i will read your thing now i promise i might not finish but just know 6k words is already impressive

>>3816760
>Purely Boolean
my fav line
>One hand was judged,the other..Cut off
i feel like i read this somewhere today, not a comment just sleepy
i thought this was emotional and it does represent i think what a adolescent or young adult go through seeking guidance or direction from their elders and finding that their own opinion and concerns are of no concerns to those they looked to for advice
>Inside, but outside
i don't get it

>>3816691
Rebours, i don't know what this means
>buried deep within my abdomen
lungs?
>guarding the gates between states of being unaccessed
dont get it
>cleaving twin souls together in one sheath?
dont get it
>resurfacing against superego from the safety of subconscious
to resist reactionary riots of self-righteous outrage.
And in the midst of all the violence and thrall,
i understand poetic license but there is no violence while there is self righteous outrage but u must admit self righteousness is shared by everyone not just the right wing. The superego and subconscious metaphor is creative but not really relevant

>>3816727
i just meant that it felt to me like when i hear a speech from the other side of the aisle talking about the evils of weed
if u want i will pull out quotes but i just mean to say its longer then it needs to be

>>3816691
its okay i like it but i feel a bit brow beaten

>>3816685
i just cant believe this chick Natalie has 1.5k prada shoes just make her pissed don't mention the price of the shoes

>>3816417
i liked the additions to the histories and myths and my favorite books were about the siths but the writing left much to be desired

>>3816422
i loved it
i expect the movie to be trash just because Hollywood doesn't care about storytelling
I think the scenarios were well thought out and the only part i didn't find believable was that the Israelis let the Palestinians in but then the character didn't find it believable either

>>3816665
sry too tired i am going to sleep good luck with that

>>3813911
i hate this book

>>3816559
honestly i like the first 4 lines up to "disorder of humanity"
>You fall in love on Tuesday and forget on Sunday.
i don't really see y u forget i think u mean fall out of love