/lit/ - Literature

>>4878577
no

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loop lee loop

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0aMZpaAik8u

>>4878572
wow you know my real name when i just posted something about it like a half hour ago!!

>>4878559
meow.

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doop dee doop

http://vocaroo.com/i/s1AZHporQxHw

>>4878536
don't tell me what to do i'm the queen of lit.

>>4878544
putting your own words down.

>>4878511
who cares, i'ma talk 'til i'm dead.

>>4878515
it's not about it being a good drawing dummy lol

>>4878534
thanks. i appreciate that you posted it for me to read. keep posting it around and hope for someone to give you a few tips on how to make it fit a bit better.

>>4878504
tie the stanzas together better (i have trouble with this sometimes), don't use "the path less traveled". the last two stanzas work the best. i hate to be all "show don't tell" but unless you have the right way to say something important it seems to become unimportant. it's just not a very intriguing piece of writing as is but it has potential.

>>4878520
i'm the best trip, all i do is make threads that legitimately make this board better

>>4878496
how i feel re: lit

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0c9miEs1Lqq

>>4878488
you know i won't leave until i get bored of you thankless cunts.

>>4878463
really? i think your poem read well.
and i love hearing my own words read aloud. it makes them seem hecka pretty. i might just make this thread into my reading all 100 of my schizoaffected poems.

>>4878469
i did this in the 3rd grade with a hot glue gun after i wrote my first book on the stamp act. if you have the will it's pretty easy.

>>4878447
no "petty" was pretty accurate.

>>4878408
i think we all know that i do not do this wah wah wah.

>>4878400
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0dnF0mLty9z

>>4878394
please bear with my smoky-shit voice freak out cat
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1nkpHQcZTT3
i could just not read this plainly sorry. i do think it works as a poem too but it's really good as lyrics. i don't have any real criticism

>>4878386
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1p57ppzFnYb

oh no i stumbled. what's funny is i can't really say the word 'grace' even though it's my name

>>4878355
i'm a lady so i doubt it was me.

>>4878330
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0CttZRazI8p

>>4878333
no, sorry.

>>4878341
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1l0XiTtt3BT

since the last time!

i'll read your poetry and prose aloud and provide critiques if i can be bothered until i fall asleep. crashin' off dexies so i might wander off but hopefully my effort will be pretty sustained.

please, good meter poetry, come to me!

>>4858512
awe. are you an anon i've spoken to before?

>>4858514
hurtful :(

>>4858504
how many times did you have to retake that?

>>4858503
wow aren't we hilarious and smart enough to copy/paste!

>>4858500
anything involving mythos and magic. pretty words and poems.
i'm mostly done with reading for a while aside from junky over and over again for various reasons.

i'm writing to write a novella surrounding all of my vignettes and cigarettes but i'm lacking in vigor so it hasn't come to fruition yet

i suck fat cock in truck stop restrooms

>>4858431
>What age are you now?
21

if you like neo-noir i'd read kiss me, judas. it's an okay book. i don't really do that sort of thing anymore. dermaphoria is actually better than the contortionist's handbook but it's a different style if you haven't read it.