/lit/ - Literature

>>8110509
sure post what you want I like music

>>8110232
>implying /lit/ listens to music and not audiobooks

>>8108235
Don't ever capitalize "And" it just seems illiterate.

I cant give much critique since I don't know what you're writing. But from what I read I cant get interested since the writing flip flops back and forth with questions. I'm sure it's good but I just need to know more on what you're writing about.

I'm writing a novel called "The Southern Vampire." it seems very cliché but I put my own twist to it. It's a epistolary novel from two different people
One is a Missionaire for a church in KY
and the other is a boy 17 who moved from Washington with a family of five. It's a cat and mouse story of who's hunting who. After Michael Smith (the vampire) dies of a sudden death in his 20's. He comes back to find Harriet (17yo boy) and his family to be living in his once owned house. As he terrorizes them, they set out to put down the damned demon back to his true death

I woke up at 12:30 last night to find my father telling me to slip my clothes on. I asked him what for and he replied hastly
"Mr. House found some of his goats dead, and we have to help him out."
We walked outside and waiting was Mr. House in his Studebaker. It was raining so I sat in one of the seats in the back.
"I'm thank you two enough for comin' round for help'' Mr. House said.
We drove off to the farm. It was only water on water outside, and the doors were washed off from most sight. Nasty rain was flooding some of the street.
When we arrived at the farm; there were four of the work men out with their laterns. The rain made them all covered and wet.
"The goats were found out here an our ago" he spit and told us "Walter over here said he heard some noises from the outhouse, and went to go check on em'. When he went he saw


I will continue if you'd like

It's one of my best writings

>>7901505
"The Case For Christ" - Lee Strobel

>>7874908
Compared to Donald Trump he was one sexy motherfucker because he wasn't only he had some wits. See pic related: his harem while he was a dirt poor exile bohemien in Switzerland.

Yes, this is oc, and thank you. The "gothicness" of the first few lines was unintentional (though, as I look back, a bit over the top); I just wrote what popped into my head one morning on my way to class.

Benaiah’s Ring

White branches, white vines,
Twisting limbs like broke spines,
Redding spots like frozen blood,
Enamel floor on bracken mud,
Pearly puff on still top pines;
The needles as an emerald brine.
The dapper sun upon his seat,
Shines bright & clear & without heat,
Shows all as if a darkling jewel,
Creations shining silver pool,
Filled with shadows & with light,
A winter morn is quite a sight,
Yet one must sigh, and one must say,
That all of this shall pass away.
But as it goes, one just might see,
A hidden glimpse of eternity.

>>5404554
not a bad book on the whole.

Recently I read The Things They Carried again. Quite good.

>>5343630
How Can We Fail If We've Won The Battle All Of The Times?

Catcher in the rye

How Can Mirrors Be Real If Our Eyes Aren't Real

>>4268232
You can read Marx, but don't stop there, after Marx read about Carl Menger,Leon Walras, William Stanley Jevons. Then move onto Keynes, from there Milton Friedman.

>>4259037
If you get behind someone, who lacks proper martial arts training, it is likely that they have already lost a fight.

>>4249482
He killed a shitload of proletariat

We will, me and you will become the best survivalists that have ever attempted to live in the wild.

This is how i have been preparing myself the hardships i am going to face in the wild.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xtYRbZ7o4rc

I will email you soon my literary acquaintance. Also teenagers my friend are invincible

btw the book is called into the wild

I normally go to B but i am here because i am reading a book. This famous book has completely changed my life. I want to fallow him exactly in his footsteps and see what he saw. I want to have the opportunity to re live his happiest and darkest moments. I am about to take the first steps to living my life in a different way. Also are there any people here who can recommend me other books, I have recently found the drive to read.

true blood

>>1939001

Now, how is that cliched trope trash?

>>1938956

I was going to post a couple of paragraph's where the protagoist's friend (let's call him Steven) and his brofriend (Derek) get the shit beaten out of them by somebody clad in riot armor, but I seem to have not saved the .txt file saving all the little bits so I'm going to post a tl;dr version.

Basically, the three start fighting, riot officer guy beats Steven spectacularly by grabbing his arm, punching him in the gut, kneeing his face, punching his face on one side, returning the arm for an elbow to the other side, a headbutt, and then bringing the gun from his back and swinging it up to his chin.

Steven is on the ground, he sees riot-clad moderator beating up Derek, and takes out a revolver and starts loading it. Officer notices, reflects it with his assault rifle, and stomps Steven on the face, rendering him unconscious.

He's about to kill Steven there when a girl from the crowd runs in and grabs his gun. He punches her, she wrenches the gun away and empties the magazine in his midsection.