/lit/ - Literature

Didactic shit

You don't give a thought to rhythm or the sound of your words

This isn't poetry, it's prose (bad prose) with line breaks.

>>411180
It's because people who read a lot tend to be more intellectual and people who are more intellectual tend to be more liberal.

No offense meant to anyone.

his church quote may be one of the worst things I've ever heard, talk about a conservative American misunderstanding of Christianity... but then, he is actually a Mormon

>>411195
I know this. ;-; How do I fix it?

Book store i frequent had a whole pallet of this turds books sitting in the middle of an isle for months and i never once saw an open space. i don't think anyone bought it.

This is fucking horrible. I no longer have any faith in a supreme intelligent being after reading this.

>implying i pity the fool

>>411190
>>implying that I have no fucking clue how to archive something.

>>411200
Really? I though he was "Generic protestant that has the most rage appeal in America".

This is not poetry. It is 14 yr old writing.

>>411208
>implying all you have to do is go to 4chanarchive.com click request intrerface and let it guide you from there

fuck you

Anyone else watch the Daily Show? they just did a bit about glenn beck.

I found it amusing.

>>411207
>>implying that this is now a Samuel L. Jackson thread

Op here. I was molested as a child.

>>411204

There is absolutely no way to fix this. None. At all. I am not trying to be a dick: it really is that bad.

> implying this thread is not gay

>>411216
>implying your'e not the one getting fucked already, undoubtedly by a large black man named bubba

>>411220
Yeah, it's why I made this thread. I was going to make it Sunday after I visited the bookstore but I forgot. The piece on the Daily Show just reminded me.

I laughed my ass off when Jon said that "I think he found his new sign off" joke.

>>411205
heh. yeah, I doubt many conservatives go to bookstores. I imagine they get the few books they read at Walmart

>>411180
>its ok for me to call people who disagree with me names because they call me names.

derp.jpg

>>411129
Out of curiousity does this have anthing on his crazy dollar bill theories? Because that would make it just golden.

>>411220
I want to see someone go on his show and confront him about his bullshit. That's the only way some of his viewers will even see it.

>>411229

>implying I didn't just troll you

>>411195
>>411215
>>411209

Okay. Look. I know this is bad. I know it very well. But no matter how much I read and write, I don't seem to get any better. I can recognize what's bad and what's good, but writing isn't like math where there's a set set of rules. If this poem really is too bad to critique, then could you try giving me a crash course on writing better?>>411209