/jp/'s Original Content/Drawthread #161

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/jp/'s Original Content/Drawthread #161 Anonymous Wed Jan 7 10:38:00 2015 No.12884698 [Reply] [Original]

General original content/drawthread for /jp/. You may use this thread to contribute your works or to share ideas related to possible projects. Anything OC is welcomed; including drawings, writings, music, cooking, and programming.

Previous thread >>12831718

Anonymous Wed Jan 7 10:53:11 2015 No.12884732

>>12884698
Oh hey.

Remastered demo of that song I posted in the last thread.
Something weird happened during the upload and now there is a really weird popping noise at the start which startled me to death, just as a fair warning.
It's still all over the place, but has better quality than the previous version nonetheless.

https://clyp.it/o2wxkmqk

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 13:45:59 2015 No.12885134 Synth's sections. My little sisters coming over today to record the vocals, then I need to record the ukulele. I really wish I knew how to make better drum sequencing. http://a.pomf.se/eiebvh.mp3

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 15:29:22 2015 No.12885435 >>12884698 Oh look a copycat

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 18:03:04 2015 No.12885998 >>12884732 Have you planned to add vocals?

Threadly /jp/ Music Project 3 (...) Wed Jan 7 18:16:10 2015 No.12886038 [DELETED]

Happy new year thread, /jp/ OC. This is a reminder that we are currently making another /jp/ music compilation album (#3). Any works of music, and/or album art is welcome. Just as with the first, there is little-to-no "requirement" in length, genre, or whatever classification or meter you can think of. If you wish to join and submit through the dropbox, you can email me at jpmsicproject1@gmail.com and I'll send you an invite. You can also simply post your stuff in this thread and make a note about it being a submission to the music compi, or send your contribution directly through mail.

Currently, we have passed the original deadline before meeting a reasonable number of submissions. Only two songs have been submitted so far, but if I remember correctly, one is promised to be in the works, and will be submitted "next year", which is this year. No worries, we can keep the project going until we manage to get enough submissions.

On that note, don't worry about submitting as many tracks as you want to the project. We can worry about that when it comes, but for now, it'd be best if we can pool as many possible tracks as we can from as many people as we can. From /jp/, of course.

Take it easy, /jp/.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 18:18:15 2015 No.12886044 >>12884698 is this qt girl the one from the platformer game posted by some anon before?

Threadly /jp/ Music Project 3 (...) Wed Jan 7 18:20:23 2015 No.12886049

(Ugh, mistyped the email address of all things)

Happy new year thread, /jp/ OC. This is a reminder that we are currently making another /jp/ music compilation album (#3). Any works of music, and/or album art is welcome. Just as with the first, there is little-to-no "requirement" in length, genre, or whatever classification or meter you can think of. If you wish to join and submit through the dropbox, you can email me at jpmusicproject1@gmail.com and I'll send you an invite. You can also simply post your stuff in this thread and make a note about it being a submission to the music compi, or send your contribution directly through mail.

Currently, we have passed the original deadline before meeting a reasonable number of submissions. Only two songs have been submitted so far, but if I remember correctly, one is promised to be in the works, and will be submitted "next year", which is this year. No worries, we can keep the project going until we manage to get enough submissions.

On that note, don't worry about submitting as many tracks as you want to the project. We can worry about that when it comes, but for now, it'd be best if we can pool as many possible tracks as we can from as many people as we can. From /jp/, of course.

Take it easy, /jp/.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 19:43:10 2015 No.12886276 File: 101 KB, 607x484, 010715.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] is there some kind of auto-correction in clipstudio? i turned off the stabilizer but it feels too good >>12884698 you put too much detail into the eyes, it's jarring. tone it down

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 19:59:01 2015 No.12886305 >>12886276 They kinda look reminiscent of chameleon eyes. Also that they lack any sort of pupil is what's jarring to me.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 20:04:11 2015 No.12886318 >>12886276 What the fuck is wrong with her face, she looks a dude. She has a peanut shaped head. I also think OP's pic is cute like that.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 20:05:46 2015 No.12886327 >>12886276 Why the long face

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 20:09:03 2015 No.12886338 >>12886318 >>12886327 i fucked up the face length really bad when i redrew it i guess. i'm really not seeing why she looks like a dude though

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 20:30:50 2015 No.12886401 >>12886338 Her face is just incredibly, incredibly ugly. Like, it doesn't even resemble her.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 20:32:57 2015 No.12886403 >>12884698 This shit is so gay

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 20:39:32 2015 No.12886426 >>12886276 I'm inclined to agree with >>12886401 But as for something constructive, try lowering her mouth slightly, give her a nose job, and how about fixing the expression in her eyes?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 20:40:32 2015 No.12886430 >>12886426 Oh, and her forehead is too large. Not qt at all.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 21:02:31 2015 No.12886490 File: 339 KB, 906x379, AkiBeanMachine.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12886305

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 21:12:05 2015 No.12886516 >>12886490 I can see forever

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 22:07:58 2015 No.12886717 File: 104 KB, 499x535, wannaeatmyhair？.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12886401 >>12886426 is this no longer ugly?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 22:09:52 2015 No.12886728 >>12886717 Something still seems a little off about the mouth, but it's much better.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 22:30:58 2015 No.12886803 >>12886717 Try and draw the crosshairs of the face, I think there's a misalignment going on.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 23:07:54 2015 No.12886950 File: 118 KB, 499x535, jp.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12886717 Very cute. Though she looks kind of lopsided. I attempted to straighten it if you don't mind.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 23:11:45 2015 No.12886967 >>12886950 There we go.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 23:23:00 2015 No.12887014 >>12886803 i really need to get into sudying again i've gotten lazy >>12886950 thanks, although i was trying to make it look like she was hunched/leaning forward

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 23:42:07 2015 No.12887081 >>12887014 She doesn't look crazed enough.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 23:48:39 2015 No.12887104 Did the sim loli demo ever come out?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 7 23:50:35 2015 No.12887108 >>12887104 you missed the link from the last thread bro it's gone now. too bad.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 00:14:00 2015 No.12887180 File: 176 KB, 680x680, 1419916891591.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Well, I tried adding vocals to it. https://clyp.it/uc35d1dt

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 00:43:22 2015 No.12887235 File: 47 KB, 607x484, hapeanut miku.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12886276

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 00:51:28 2015 No.12887254 >>12887108 Ah well. I think I know where to find him. He really likes toddlers.

Anonymous Thu Jan 8 00:54:10 2015 No.12887261

>>12885998
Hmmm, I don't think anything I would come up with would sound halfway decent. I am still very unexperienced, since this is the first recording I actually turned into a song of over three minutes length. And I feel like vocals could disturb the established "balance" with distraction from the instruments.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 00:56:03 2015 No.12887262 >>12886717 This is far better than >>12886950 I think, though something may be off. I would still eat her hair, though.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 03:16:57 2015 No.12887476 >>12887180 So whiny and sarcastic, it's kind of hard to listen to. I understand what you're attempting, but I don't think the execution is quite there.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 03:19:01 2015 No.12887478 >>12887235 Heh

Anonymous Thu Jan 8 03:34:13 2015 No.12887509

>>12887180
Hey, is that you? Because it's pretty in key, just a bit muddy, not sure if it's due the mixing or the recording.
Way better than the previous all-Vocaloid version,

May I have the lyrics and maybe the instrumental? I might be able to give some input on intonation. Not a singer myself, be warned.

>>12887235
Fucking kek'd.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 08:34:36 2015 No.12887981 >>12887180 Much better.

Anonymous Thu Jan 8 09:44:32 2015 No.12888061 [DELETED]

Hey there fellow jp-artists.
I know this isn't the place for requests of any kind, there is just something I'd like to humbly ask for.
Beside my current inability to draw anything digitally there is also the fact that I don't trust my own hands to do the following:
I'd like a big, high-resolution version of Hoshiguma Yuugis sigil that's found inside the Grimoire of Marisa. Since the original print is already pretty small, most of what you can find online is also a tiny scan or in plain bad quality.
For those who don't own the copy, google search should quickly resolve the problem.

As for what I need it for (inb4 normie scum), I want to get a tatoo of it. I know, I may be shit, but I really want to get one this or the next year around.
Would there be anyone willing to help me out?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 09:55:52 2015 No.12888074 >>12888061 How much money are you paying? Or are you one of those little shits who think art is free?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 10:02:39 2015 No.12888081 >>12888061 This>>12888074 I hope you're not expecting anything (good) for free.

Anonymous Thu Jan 8 10:12:24 2015 No.12888096 [DELETED]

>>12888074
>>12888081
I already paid for the art itself, meaning the original, so of course I wont pay much in order to get someone to copy something.
Plus it's something I can do if given enough time, I just don't trust myself as much as some guys that are here.

That being said, it depends on how much the one doing it would want to be paid.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 10:15:38 2015 No.12888100 >>12888096 I'll do it for $35 USD.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 10:16:54 2015 No.12888101 >>12888100 Do you have any examples of your work? Have to confirm your skill, of course.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 10:18:30 2015 No.12888104 >>12888101 Just trust me you dumbfuck

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 10:20:18 2015 No.12888107 >>12888104 Oh, you little trickster.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 11:14:03 2015 No.12888185 File: 210 KB, 3350x4520, semen demon.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I need to learn how to draw lewd shit one of these days.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 11:14:55 2015 No.12888188 >>12886950 >>12886717 this is better>>12886276 keep listening to those guys if you want to become another featureless moeface drone.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 11:30:14 2015 No.12888231 >>12888185 Lewd is the only way

Anonymous Thu Jan 8 12:43:05 2015 No.12888386
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>>12888185
those glasses wouldn't be able to fit on either of them
>>12888188
i've already gotten the gist that jp likes moefaces but that's not my calling in life so don't worry i'll keep making ugly boyfaced girls

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 12:59:33 2015 No.12888436 >>12888185 "Be the lewd!"

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 13:32:13 2015 No.12888510 >>12888185 People actually tend to turn their upper torso along with their head. Do some research.

Anonymous Thu Jan 8 17:17:18 2015 No.12889131

>>12887476
>So whiny and sarcastic
Yea, my voice is naturally very whiny. So I figure just play on my strengths instead of trying to sound like something I'm not.

>>12887509
Yep, that's me. Good to hear it's mostly in key, I've been practicing since I last recorded vocals (Cease to Exist) and I'd like to hope I've made some progress.

>just a bit muddy
Probably the mixing. I have OCD when it comes to my songs so I spent like 7 hours mixing it so by the time I finished my ears were so fatigued I couldn't really make a reliable judge on how it sounded. Another problem I think is I mixed the vocals too low because I'm usually told I mix the vocals too high. I raised them a bit, so it should sound much better: https://clyp.it/ukn4ntb2

Here's the instrumental: https://clyp.it/y1bnicfn.mp3
Lyrics: http://pastebin.com/SL3Mq0kR

Also, I tried to change up the drums in the intro at several anon's suggestions, but I'm not sure if it works better?

>>12887981
Thank you.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 17:28:48 2015 No.12889160 >>12887180 Wow that singing is embarrassing me holy shit.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 17:58:53 2015 No.12889255 >>12886717 Eating hair is usually not a very good idea.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 18:20:44 2015 No.12889335 File: 494 KB, 963x720, orin 2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 21:28:35 2015 No.12889950 >>12888188 Stop trying to sabotage the guy. It's mean.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 21:34:21 2015 No.12889970 File: 412 KB, 990x1215, koishi.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12889950 『しーっ！静かにしなさいよ！お姉ちゃんが起きちゃうよ！』

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 21:36:00 2015 No.12889976 File: 113 KB, 544x835, ebd3b6778d.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] seaport hime WIP

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 21:36:13 2015 No.12889977 File: 412 KB, 990x1215, koishi.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] 『しーっ！静かにしなさいよ！お姉ちゃんが起きちゃうよ！』

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 21:45:21 2015 No.12890014 >>12889976 Nice. I hate kancolle but I love the abyssal ships

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 21:48:26 2015 No.12890023 >>12889977 The hand should be angled perpendicular to the face for a proper "shush"-ing expression.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 8 22:03:50 2015 No.12890048 Another day, another track https://soundcloud.com/djcrinkles/apex

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 09:41:40 2015 No.12891476 >>12890023 looks more like she's touching her chin

Anonymous Fri Jan 9 13:00:56 2015 No.12891937
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>>12887104
>Did the sim loli demo ever come out?
>>12887108
>>12887254
>He really likes toddlers.

I actually prefer kindergarteners and early elementary schoolers.

Anwyay, for those who missed it, the demo's at http://pastebin.com/Bhd0gwFW

I fixed a couple bugs since the last thread, but only about a day's worth of work. No more infinite blowjob loop! Collisions are now enabled on more things, and some crashes were fixed. It's still pretty buggy though.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 13:16:00 2015 No.12891991 >>12891937 >kindergarteners and early elementary school So, toddlers.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 13:17:01 2015 No.12891997 File: 114 KB, 358x868, cold.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 13:23:08 2015 No.12892014 >>12891991 Toddlers are so named for their tendency to toddle and fall. Hopefully a child can walk reliably once they reach kindergarten.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 14:02:40 2015 No.12892110 >>12891937 Won't load for me. 0x000007c error.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 14:15:36 2015 No.12892146 File: 83 KB, 700x525, hunny.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12892110

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 14:18:54 2015 No.12892155 File: 227 KB, 1024x1077, 1024px-PikiWiki_Israel_19879_Education_in_Israel.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12892014 Does this image do it for you?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 14:37:30 2015 No.12892184 >>12892155 Are they teaching babies to wash their own diapers?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 14:41:17 2015 No.12892195 >>12892184 Well, they're jews, buying new diapers would cost too much and time is money.

Anonymous Fri Jan 9 16:00:11 2015 No.12892369

>>12891937
2 crashes to report

Once from entering the dungeon mode before having a new game, then trying to start a new game it crashes. Some times after I exit form the "skip to dungeon" mode it crashes instantly.

After running over a few lolis in the cop car I tried to talk to one and it crashed after I asked her name.

Win 7 x64

Anonymous Fri Jan 9 16:37:36 2015 No.12892478
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>>12892369

Both of those are known. I've partially debugged the crash-on-exit bug, it's somehow related to cop cars.

Or at least for the second it's known that if you are talking to a loli and she gets run over then if you talk more it crashes, since I never close the dialogue when a loli dies.

Was the loli still alive you were talking to?

>>12892110

What OS? Does it just instantly crash as soon as you launch it?

>>12891991

Please read https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Toddler

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 17:16:53 2015 No.12892573 >>12888386 how the fuck has no one mentioned your drawing's great yet

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 17:17:54 2015 No.12892577 >>12891476 yeah, pondering

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 17:22:22 2015 No.12892591 >>12889950 Telling him to become one with the hive would be sabotage.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 18:35:53 2015 No.12892797 >>12891476 >>12892577 Yes, I see that but I found that at odds with his posted caption, so I concluded he might have made a mistake.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 19:05:42 2015 No.12892888 >>12892591 Keep fighting the power, bro. But leave those with an actual future out of it.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 19:12:04 2015 No.12892912 >>12892888 last i checked moe uguu wasn't an actual future, unless you count tumblr or deviantart as one.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 19:41:29 2015 No.12893008 >>12892912 Keep shuffling in the dark.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 20:01:13 2015 No.12893061 File: 14 KB, 480x360, where do you think you are anonymous.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12892888 >those with an actual future

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 20:06:11 2015 No.12893082 >>12893061 nice /a/ reaction image

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 20:07:28 2015 No.12893086 >>12892888 Define "actual future".

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 20:07:48 2015 No.12893087 >>12892912 You don't have to be super stylized moe to not make drawings that are disgustingly ugly you know that? Or is your intelligence so limited it appears that black and white to you?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 20:15:59 2015 No.12893113 File: 524 KB, 2550x3501, 001.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12884698 Some practice redrawing higurashi sprites.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 20:18:15 2015 No.12893124 >>12893113 Good! A few more years and it might turn into "great"!

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 20:21:39 2015 No.12893136 File: 111 KB, 624x624, rejecting_a_polaroid.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 20:37:13 2015 No.12893173 >>12893087 while >>12886276 had some strange proportions, his second attempt at >>12886717 was much better, and definitely more interesting than the >>12886950 edit. your ad hominem part only deserves a 'u mad' reply.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 20:45:32 2015 No.12893211 File: 395 KB, 1092x1092, koishi_2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12892797 Then how about this? I even advanced the story a little. >『しーっ！静かにしなさいよ！お姉ちゃんが起きちゃうよ！』 >『こいしちゃん…それはもう遅い。』

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 20:58:49 2015 No.12893269 >>12892478 Win7, and as soon as I launch, yeah.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 21:07:01 2015 No.12893294 File: 145 KB, 686x1163, Nervous looking girl.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Drew this yesterday.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 21:10:36 2015 No.12893312 File: 8 KB, 207x218, loli rainbow.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12893269 What is your hardware?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 22:11:05 2015 No.12893500 >>12893211 Good on. I should honestly point out that the angle of the hand in front of the index finger is still off (look at yourself in the mirror, straight-on doing the pose - you should find out), but it seems to portray it more now than the last.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 22:27:28 2015 No.12893558 File: 139 KB, 820x757, swimsuit world.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I want to make a VN but I'm not sure about what yet

Anonymous Fri Jan 9 22:30:35 2015 No.12893564
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>>12893500

Could you redline it? Thought it seemed fine now..

>>12893211

(next panel where koishi getting the shit kicked out of her お願い) m(__)m
Also almost done with this track, what'd you think?

https://clyp.it/muzvph3e

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 22:35:07 2015 No.12893578 >>12893124 I'll keep on trying my best, thankyou. >>12893558 Dating sims are something that would be nice to see ..

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 22:39:19 2015 No.12893592 >>12893578 but there are so many of those, aren't there? I'd want a bit more substance, like moe + substance

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 22:42:57 2015 No.12893603 >>12893592 how about a dating sim where everyone's on suicide watch and the MC's been assigned to them as a social worker

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 22:49:00 2015 No.12893619 >>12893603 That sounds so dark but I might just use that. any more ideas?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 22:53:34 2015 No.12893623 >>12893619 come up with your own.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 22:59:54 2015 No.12893633 >>12893619 a whale

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 23:23:00 2015 No.12893687 >>12893623 but you had a good one. i could credit you for the idea if you like >>12893633 moe whale??

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 9 23:25:53 2015 No.12893694 >>12893558 Make a comic about swimsuit world instead.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 01:31:33 2015 No.12893960 >>12893694 I had thought about doing the VN on Swimsuit world, but it just seemed so stupid

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 01:40:15 2015 No.12893983 >>12893960 A VN would be stupid, but a nonsensical comic would be perfect. A VN would just involve meeting them at the pool or being a lifeguard or something.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 06:23:59 2015 No.12894565 >>12893564 I think she might get much more angry at the guy trying to do things to her naked little sister in the middle of the night.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 10:13:19 2015 No.12894986 File: 593 KB, 700x963, adultkoi.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I tried.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 10:14:45 2015 No.12894988 >>12894986 Maybe you should try harder.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 10:18:05 2015 No.12894996 >>12894986 You've succeeded in making me want to look for more Koishi with huge breasts, at least.

Anonymous Sat Jan 10 11:17:32 2015 No.12895094

>>12893564
Pure Eurobeat! Great.
The voice is drowning a bit in the mix, but a slight bump around 1k~2k in the vocal track and, if needed, remove it in the same range for other instruments.

>>12894986
Yay, freeform anatomy is back on block. Welcome back.

Anonymous Sat Jan 10 11:39:06 2015 No.12895158

>>12893558
Make swimsuit world with factions and politics and some revolution that's the center of the story. Also religious beliefs based on types of swimsuits. Wars with waterpistols. In the end the protagonist learns something that changes his or her beliefs about swimsuits (everyone should be free to choose one's own swimsuit or onepiece is best swimsuit after all).

Alternatively the invasion and conquer of earth through the people of the swimsuit world. The protag could be some randomly chosen human test subject that helps them get along better with humans or makes them choose to destroy earth (with you on it or not) based on your ingame decissions.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 11:41:50 2015 No.12895163 >>12893558 The protag lands in the swimsuit world by accident and the inhabitants wonder about his strange clothing and try to help him get back into his homeworld. Hilarities ensue.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 11:51:55 2015 No.12895186 >>12884698 some shit sipping mod deleted my thread how do you drawfags learn how to draw? does anyone here use japanese tutorials, books, guides, etc?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 11:56:43 2015 No.12895194 >>12895186 /ic/'s sticky helped me a lot. i honestly haven't seen any japanese resources that were worth looking into

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 12:07:33 2015 No.12895212 anyone here uses some guide, book or tutorial to how to draw?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 12:09:29 2015 No.12895220 >>12895212 >>>/ic/

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 12:12:48 2015 No.12895237 >>12895220 i have my reasons to be asking this here and not /ic/

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 12:13:31 2015 No.12895240 >>12895237 >>>/ic/

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 12:14:02 2015 No.12895242 >>12895237 You should try /ic/

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 12:20:18 2015 No.12895253 >>12895220 >>12895220 >>12895240 >>12895242 when i asked an artist on /d/ where he learned how to draw he gave me a legit response and recommended hampton, why do you have to act like complete assholes if someone asks a question?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 12:21:59 2015 No.12895261 File: 93 KB, 577x575, 1420362546916.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12895253 because /ic/ has all the info in a sticky, you don't even need to ask

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 12:22:29 2015 No.12895264 >>12895253 Why are you not asking in /ic/?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 12:24:45 2015 No.12895269 >>12895237 Judging by how you write and whine, and ignoring everyone, I guess the reason is you can't take criticism. I suggest you quit drawing or show it only to your mom, she will say it's wonderful 100% of the time.

Anonymous Sat Jan 10 12:26:19 2015 No.12895273 [DELETED]

>>12895261
>>12895264

im actually looking for a japanese guide, book, tutorial or anything for manga. there's a thread on this subject on /ic/ but the books people posted there are written by westerners. ive seem some speed drawing from japanese artists and they seem to have a different thought process i want to learn more about

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 12:27:22 2015 No.12895278 >>12895273 Have you tried asking /ic/, or google?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 12:27:43 2015 No.12895279 >>12895253 A simple board redirection is enough to make you believe they're being assholes? >>12895269 is 100% correct. Grow a spine.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 12:28:40 2015 No.12895281 >>12895269 please dont project and pretend you know how to analyse the psychology of someone because you probably havent had human contact in a while

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 12:30:45 2015 No.12895285 >>12895278 yes and yes ''how the japanese learn how to draw'' or ''japanese artist drawing books'' just lead to westerners teaching how to draw manga.

Anonymous Sat Jan 10 12:38:04 2015 No.12895296 [DELETED]

>>12895285
They learn it the western way, dipshit, Loomis and all that stuff. And if you don't speak japanese, I suggest you do the same.
Nothing worse than a weeaboo believing he can skip the fundamental learning process and jump into loli scribbling.
There is no magic formula, shitposting in /jp/ won't make you better.

I hope mods will soon clear this ocean of bullshit you've brought upon this thread. A good dose of /ic/ might put you back in your place.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 12:39:03 2015 No.12895298 >>12895296 Should really refresh the thread sometimes...

Anonymous Sat Jan 10 13:00:15 2015 No.12895339 [DELETED]

>>12895296
>a weeaboo

actually i havent watched an anime in quite a while. also this is /jp/, who the fuck are you to be saying shit like this?

>They learn it the western way, dipshit, Loomis and all that stuff.
you are saying that based on what exactly? i already said their process differs from most of the western ones i have seem. i never said i dont study fundamentals and I have been reading vilppu, loomis and hampton for quite a while. I just want a japanese author/book name, if you dont know any why are you bothering replying? i also dont get why you are so butthurt. if I asked a similar question in any other board i would never see this amount of ass pain like you seem to have.

plus you speak as if there were undeniable rules to how to draw or only one way to learn like you knew what you are talking but i suspect you are simply parroting whatever you see on /ic/ posted on a daily basis and cant even draw a stick figure.

Anonymous Sat Jan 10 13:02:28 2015 No.12895349 [DELETED]

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>>12895339
Everything you say to me
Takes me one step closer to the edge
And I'm about to break
I need a little room to breathe
Cause I'm one step closer to the edge
And I'm about to break

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 13:28:28 2015 No.12895404 Honestly loomis isnt even all that helpful. He gives the decent points but its not all that in-depth. I'd suggest Glen Vilppu's instructional courses.

Anonymous Sat Jan 10 14:45:42 2015 No.12895577
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Trying to sketch some crystal rooms. I think I will make them all be different shapes somehow. they'll be their own rooms I think so then I can make it stationary and really paint it up and make it nice.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 14:54:31 2015 No.12895600 File: 550 KB, 900x506, 1382496876439.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] One day this game will be real, right? RIGHT?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 14:58:21 2015 No.12895610 just watch some bob ross videos you'll be a pro in no time

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 16:25:27 2015 No.12895813 >>12895577 Put a Cirno in the ice level.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 16:26:38 2015 No.12895818 >>12895600 whoa what's this? >>12895339 What were you asking originally..?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 16:55:13 2015 No.12895888 >>12895600 That would require a few /jp/sies to work hard, collaborate, stay dedicated and finish something. So never

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 17:05:01 2015 No.12895906 >>12895888 >katawa shoujo

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 17:56:09 2015 No.12896072 >>12895906 >/a/ >old 4chan crew got replaced with weebs

Anonymous Sat Jan 10 17:59:19 2015 No.12896084

>>12893564
An image search on google images would do:

https://www.google.com/search?q=shush&newwindow=1&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ei=U62xVIKDFs2XuASV6YDACQ&ved=0CAgQ_AUoAQ&biw=1920&bih=920

If you would note the positions of their knuckles, they line up almost precisely in a vertical line (note only the ones with the face forward, same as yours). I've come to realize that there are indeed a few (very few) instances where the hand position is similar to yours, but I maintain that it's very few because it is awkward.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 20:05:06 2015 No.12896502 File: 8 KB, 160x120, spin.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 20:25:06 2015 No.12896559 >>12896502 thats very good anon! Animation is a lot of work.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 20:47:47 2015 No.12896614 File: 47 KB, 379x354, choronzon-tan.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I'll get this done tonight, hopefully, since I'm mostly done with it

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 20:58:06 2015 No.12896655 >>12895818 Anime guide books. And he says he isn't a weeb and he also thinks other boards wouldn't think he's a weeb.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 21:27:43 2015 No.12896739 File: 302 KB, 333x1333, Aya is working very hard!.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 21:29:08 2015 No.12896744 >>12896739 No one cares about kuso Tengu media!

Anonymous Sat Jan 10 21:29:30 2015 No.12896747
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>>12896084
Oh, I sorta see it now. Thanks.
I'm in a really good mood, because I saw the cutest little girl at the mall today. Her cuteness was honestly off the scale. I wish I could've taken a picture.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 21:30:20 2015 No.12896751 >>12895906 That was a mess, took 5 years, and the 4chan people got kicked out for DA kiddies

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 21:42:41 2015 No.12896800 >>12896751 The main artists still frequented 4chan and were better anyway.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 22:02:30 2015 No.12896890 File: 276 KB, 950x950, okuu doodle.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Warheads.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 22:21:05 2015 No.12896969 >>12896739 This is so, so, so. So so so. So. SOSOSO SO SO SO CRUEL, DUDE!

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 22:37:23 2015 No.12897027 >>12893294 Fat!

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 22:43:15 2015 No.12897050 >>12893312 What language/framework do you use? Can you give the source code? Do you have any experiences with isometric games?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 22:52:34 2015 No.12897083 >>12896739 You've broken my heart

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 22:54:39 2015 No.12897091 >>12896969 >>12897083 I broke my own heart drawing it I'm glad others can share my pain

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 22:55:41 2015 No.12897094 >>12897091 why though it's so sad

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 22:56:55 2015 No.12897100 File: 719 KB, 2550x3501, 007.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12884698 >>12896890 I really like how you drew Okuu, good job. only thing I could probably say is try to have a more natural flow in the hair.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 23:12:18 2015 No.12897147 >>12897100 That's a really fucking cute face

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 10 23:21:05 2015 No.12897170 >>12897100 She looks like Sakura from Card captors

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 11 00:32:20 2015 No.12897396 File: 880 KB, 2000x2500, propfixmp.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12897100 fix'd your wonky proportions

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 11 00:47:50 2015 No.12897424 >>12897396 You made her fat&ugly Also what's a "Great Trochanter?"

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 11 00:55:13 2015 No.12897435 File: 887 KB, 2000x2500, propfixmp2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12897424 >fat&ugly I traced over your drawing but affixed it to correct props. Yours would be fat too. Better? you have google but I put the pic in what it looks like

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 11 01:23:44 2015 No.12897570 >>12897435 >your drawing I'm not the artist.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 11 01:50:09 2015 No.12897679 >>12895158 These are really good ideas. I just started working on it , I'm making it in Ren'py. I feel like I've got my work cut out for me but at least I like writing.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 11 06:38:51 2015 No.12898245 File: 581 KB, 900x1222, 1420976331454.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Some OnePunch Man NSFW fanart. Should ink if not color it later.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 11 06:45:31 2015 No.12898255 give me a funpost /jp/ like the way you useedd to

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 11 08:00:41 2015 No.12898329 >>12896890 Nice, really long forearm though.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 11 09:36:35 2015 No.12898457 >>12896890 >>12894986 all this talent wasted on characters from probably the worst game

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 11 09:51:47 2015 No.12898482 >>12898457 He's not drawing kancolle fanart though?

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 11 10:07:53 2015 No.12898505 File: 1.98 MB, 800x600, crystal.webm [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12895577 I feel slow. I have to keep stopping to catch spiders and insects with a container and put them outside.

Anonymous Sun Jan 11 10:11:15 2015 No.12898511

>>12898505
The crystal should "float" up and down a bit, and have some transparency to it.

Also, I don't know how far you've gotten on the movement, but I feel like the sideways movements of your character looks wrong. Should be some tilting and movement involved.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 11 10:16:45 2015 No.12898521 >>12898511 I think I may have to make that one of the next things I do, if even just for the sole reason people keep brining it up.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 11 10:50:17 2015 No.12898597 >>12898511 >Should be some tilting and movement involved. Secnding this

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 11 11:08:28 2015 No.12898632 >>12898505 >I have to keep stopping to catch spiders and insects with a container and put them outside. dude it's winter do you live in australia

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 11 11:15:48 2015 No.12898650 >>12898632 Yes, the spiders are everywhere.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 11 11:32:12 2015 No.12898685 File: 803 KB, 2550x3501, 002.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12897435 Thanks for pointing out a few things it helped me a bit. >>12897147 I think so too.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 11 12:30:21 2015 No.12898850 >>12898685 much better

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 11 14:28:03 2015 No.12899217 File: 1.62 MB, 1920x1200, euphoria.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Does anyone contribute writing? I'd like to read some.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 11 21:07:33 2015 No.12900501 File: 529 KB, 2550x3501, 083.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12899217 I'm working on a writing project but i'm too embarrassed about it to show anyone else...

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 11 23:34:12 2015 No.12900972 File: 680 KB, 1500x986, jp sleepover.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Today is a drawing day.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 11 23:47:24 2015 No.12901026 >>12900972 the heck is going on with the bottom right girl? She has no arms and is laying on her stomach while her crotch is facing the screen.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 12 00:05:05 2015 No.12901088 File: 70 KB, 500x516, Untitled-2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12901026 It's something like this.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 12 00:08:27 2015 No.12901097 >>12900972 Your linework makes me comfy and it has a good distribution of busy areas.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 12 00:12:47 2015 No.12901111 >>12901097 I agree with this. Those big, soft-looking drapes in the background look somewhat absurd, but in a good way, cause they look really soft and cute too.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 12 00:18:58 2015 No.12901134 >>12900972 this picture is adorable, well done >>12901088 this picture is lewd!

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 12 00:35:31 2015 No.12901190 >>12900972 me on top right

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 12 01:38:26 2015 No.12901363 File: 94 KB, 875x1050, shima.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Should I even bother coloring?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 12 01:48:52 2015 No.12901381 File: 119 KB, 400x571, images.duckduckgo.com.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12900501 Id like to read it. Amatuer writer myself. Would you mind trading works in progress? I'll be descreet.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 12 03:14:28 2015 No.12901514 >>12901363 Where is the other boot? Redo thighs. Shorten pinkie middle phalange. Make navel facing a bit more dow, it's too frontal. Then you're free to color.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 12 10:33:32 2015 No.12902300 >>12901381 I wouldn't mind...

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 12 12:29:42 2015 No.12902499 File: 2.23 MB, 800x600, depth.webm [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Trying to figure out how to add layers of depth to the foreground to make it look nice to set the precedent. This is hard. I guess I see why projects require multiple people.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 12 12:37:03 2015 No.12902522 >>12902499 Are you saying you're looking for help? I can be the idea guy

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 12 12:50:33 2015 No.12902556 >>12902522 I guess don't really need help. I can eventually do everything the project needs. I just realize how long it will take. Good thing I am a neet.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 12 12:52:48 2015 No.12902560 >>12902556 You sure are a hardworking neet. Thanks for all your hard work!

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 12 12:54:08 2015 No.12902563 >>12902560 I thought all neets were. You gotta do something during those 16-18 hours.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 12 12:55:19 2015 No.12902569 >>12902563 Surely you don't honestly believe that.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 12 14:00:54 2015 No.12902762 >>12900972 Me on the left, I'm camera shy

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 12 14:02:24 2015 No.12902769 >>12902563 I see you're also a humorous NEET.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 12 14:24:09 2015 No.12902855 >>12902563 >You gotta do something during those 16-18 hours. Funposting is a tough line of work only dedicated anons can do, most NEETs are drained after a day's worth of funposting and can't make games.

Anonymous Mon Jan 12 14:31:15 2015 No.12902879
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>>12897050
>What language/framework do you use?

C++/SFML

>Can you give the source code?

It's in the zip in the link under /src/.

>Do you have any experiences with isometric games?

I've done them before but I prefer not to. They're more annoying to create content for IMO.

Anonymous Mon Jan 12 20:15:42 2015 No.12904210

/jp/, I have a serious issue. I've been trying to make color palletes of my OCs for future reference, but for the past few months the eyedropper tool has been fucking up and picking a slightly different color, or the colors become messed up if I copy/paste the image in photoshop or painter. This mostly happens to the red and blue colors by the way. Does anyone know what's wrong?

Anonymous Mon Jan 12 20:38:32 2015 No.12904300

>>12904210
I haven't had your problem before, but here's a few things I'd do: look it up in google 'photoshop eyedropper wrong color error' (or something similar); reinstall photoshop or whatever; think I might just have very shaky hands; go to a doctor and see if I've color blindness; ask the photoshop support line. In that order.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 12 20:50:44 2015 No.12904348 >>12902879 /src/?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 12 21:03:29 2015 No.12904382 >>12902499 Unity2D?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 12 21:22:58 2015 No.12904448 >>12902499 It'd be cool if after you beat the lobster guy he becomes your buddy or something and you get to 'pilot' him for a stage like a mech.

Anonymous Mon Jan 12 21:49:07 2015 No.12904528

>>12904210
Check if your eyedropper is set for "current layer" or "absolute color", meaning it will either pick from that single layer or the actual color you see on your screen as a product of the overall piece.

Another possibility is that you've gone from RGB to CMYK mode, look for how to change your colorspace in PS (if I'm not mistaken, Image > Colorspace).

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 12 22:11:45 2015 No.12904647 File: 6 KB, 284x203, FIXED (2).png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12904348 Oh I guess the paste expired. Here's the download which contains both the full source code as well as a prebuilt Windows binary. http://pastebin.com/xsTjj9Kr

Anonymous Mon Jan 12 23:57:55 2015 No.12904969
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>>12904528
Thanks for the reply. Apparently after some googling, many people have problems with both painter and photoshop in tandem screwing with the color profile of a document.

Also I finally finished this today after nearly two months of procrastinating

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 00:41:19 2015 No.12905149 File: 195 KB, 500x500, dispassionate.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Tue Jan 13 01:00:52 2015 No.12905207

Have you /jp/ musicians ever come up with a name for a song then made the song around it?

I thought it was a cool name, and it willed me into making a song that would fit it, and it goes like this:

https://soundcloud.com/vapor-hands/slash-princess

I think I'll submit the one to the music compi too.

Anonymous Tue Jan 13 01:16:58 2015 No.12905262

>>12905207
Not a name, but I have once written an entire page describing a song's atmosphere/context, what it should be about. That's something quite challenging for instrumental music, but it worked okay.

When it comes to lyrics and all that, naming it first might be a good start for brainstorming, although the first name rarely stays.

This song is 2bright4me, where the lows at?

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 01:26:25 2015 No.12905292 File: 47 KB, 675x750, abr.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Tue Jan 13 02:03:28 2015 No.12905383

>>12905262
Holy shit you're right. When I made a quick check at the violins that were supposed to be providing the bass line, I found that their volumes were sub-level for some reason.

That said, the level of extra bass they provide probably won't be significant. I did plan it to be really bright and uppity, anyway.

I'll just update it using the same link, so you can check it in a few dozen minutes.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 02:11:04 2015 No.12905405 File: 206 KB, 1000x1000, 20150106b.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Tue Jan 13 02:28:03 2015 No.12905474

>>12905292
Gay.

>>12905383
That's more like it. Still bright as fugg, but it feels fuller with the bass hints.
And just so you know, from your title I had initially though of some grimdark murderer victorian little girl with hints of BJDs, but the music made me interpret it as some kind of katana-bearing himecut young adult woman slicing her way through the enemy forces inside of a rather spacious palace. Not grimdark at all, more like a colorful action anime from the 90s. Medium budget, 6/10 plot. Nostalgia material. I digress.

>>12905405
Now you've overdone it. I mean, the linework is still pretty, but the proportions are all over the place, with microlegs, manhands and bobblehead. If it wasn't for the animu face I'd take it for one of those magazine caricatures.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 02:53:25 2015 No.12905543 >a colorful action anime from the 90s. Medium budget, 6/10 plot. Nostalgia material. Just how I imagined.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 06:25:21 2015 No.12906006 >>12889976 >seaport hime more like yuugi ripoff

Anonymous Tue Jan 13 06:53:04 2015 No.12906053

>>12905474
>but the music made me interpret it as some kind of katana-bearing himecut young adult woman slicing her way through the enemy forces inside of a rather spacious palace. Not grimdark at all, more like a colorful action anime from the 90s. Medium budget, 6/10 plot.
Sounds like you're describing this almost
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EFldXtQXktA

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 07:29:05 2015 No.12906115 >>12906006 stfu man seaport hime is the bomb unlike yuugi

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 07:39:02 2015 No.12906134 >>12905149 Looks like a strife dialog portrait.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 07:39:17 2015 No.12906135 >>12905292 She's cute, what's her story?

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 07:41:01 2015 No.12906141 >>12906006 The only similarity is the generic oni horn placement.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 07:59:13 2015 No.12906180 >>12905207 I also updated an older track I entered back in /jp/ music compilation 2: https://soundcloud.com/vapor-hands/the-strange-visitor

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 10:03:43 2015 No.12906433 >>12904382 yes. >>12904448 Most things in the ocean are threats.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 11:50:35 2015 No.12906790 >>12905405 Proportions are awful Somehow you got worse at that

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 13:25:53 2015 No.12907117 >>12905405 I like your drawings but yeah, yo, you fucked up that one's proportions. I'd risk to say you were trying to make her legs look like they were further away from the viewers to give the impression of her chest being closer?

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 14:24:59 2015 No.12907298 >>12906790 >>12907117 Does it look realistic to you? The only wrong thing about proportions is her head, but large heads is common in anime style which is clearly what he drew.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 14:30:25 2015 No.12907316 >>12905405 Um, this girl is really cute. All of your girls are actually. Would you please consider drawing lewd?

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 14:35:00 2015 No.12907336 >>12890014 sweet, sweet alabaster 2Ds.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 15:17:29 2015 No.12907459 I have a question. Been meaning to buy a keyboard for a while, should I go for a cheap 61 key one or a full digital piano to play something from maestro ZUN? Any opinions are appreciated.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 15:31:24 2015 No.12907498 >>12907459 Have you played piano before? Go for full, especially if you're learning you're going to want the whole range.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 15:36:07 2015 No.12907509 >>12907498 No, it's my first time. I do want to go for a full one but my budget is a little tight. Guess I'll wait a little while longer, thanks.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 16:14:12 2015 No.12907630 >>12906134 I'm a bit stunned at how apt that is. I'm on a track, at least.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 16:23:02 2015 No.12907676 >>12907298 >realistic Heh, no. And it's not the face.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 16:35:30 2015 No.12907738 >>12907676 If you think you can draw better then post it and stop arguing.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 16:55:18 2015 No.12907831 >>12907298 >Does it look realistic to you? No.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 16:55:21 2015 No.12907832 File: 194 KB, 1000x1000, lens correction.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12907738 Here, I hope you like my original drawing.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 16:57:50 2015 No.12907843 >>12907832 Is that a no to lewd?

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 17:04:55 2015 No.12907879 >>12907843 I don't find anatomy distortion exactly lewd. If you are the author trying to defend your piece, just warn me already so I never comment on anything of yours again.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 17:44:30 2015 No.12908049 >>12907879 I think he's having trouble keeping track of who's who.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 18:35:09 2015 No.12908248 Ambientish BGM I guess? https://soundcloud.com/djcrinkles/giant-coral

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 19:25:34 2015 No.12908391 >>12907832 christ what a faggot

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 20:27:52 2015 No.12908589 >>12907832 >clean and detailed head >sketchy everything else Please stop. Stop at the portrait or finish the piece.

Anonymous Tue Jan 13 20:47:09 2015 No.12908659

>>12902499
The parallax is a good start, but don't stop at one layer. At least, at one more layer "the farthest", which is basically the deep-sea mountains and most farthest of objects.

What I'd like to see as a cute aside is a giant squid in the very far back, minding his own business.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 21:34:37 2015 No.12908781 >>12907879 Oh, I thought you were the original author, not being sarcastic sorry. I genuinely really want to see him draw lewd. I like his faces.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 13 21:44:40 2015 No.12908811 >>12906006 I agree that they have little similarity. if you really want to see yuugi, I can draw one. Heck I always want to draw one.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 02:38:19 2015 No.12909777 >>12907832 This is hilariously bad, quit trying.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 05:17:02 2015 No.12910148 File: 451 KB, 1100x1452, 1421230622595.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12909777 Jaypeepee is so mean today. Well, feel free to tell me how bad my drawing is as well.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 05:35:23 2015 No.12910182 >>12910148 Koishi's dick needs more details. Wouldn't suck.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 05:54:08 2015 No.12910214 >>12910148 Thunder thighs

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 05:57:46 2015 No.12910223 >>12910148 Cute! Give her dick a head tho

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 05:59:13 2015 No.12910227 >>12910223 Girls can't have dicks

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 06:10:45 2015 No.12910241 >>12904647 Thank you.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 06:26:45 2015 No.12910280 >>12910148 nsfw on jaypee!

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 06:39:10 2015 No.12910314 File: 7 KB, 300x192, makingthingsupagain test.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Nazrin is a Mormon! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X_nzq674Ucs&feature=youtu.be

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 06:53:47 2015 No.12910353 Does anyone here have any experience with GLFW game making?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 07:48:30 2015 No.12910450 File: 921 KB, 900x780, hoppo.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I posted this on /a/ but i feel like sharing with you guys. Drew a cute hoppo in frills.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 07:48:58 2015 No.12910451 >>12910450 Why is it so blurry?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 07:50:53 2015 No.12910454 >>12910451 Because chromatic aberration is cool.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 07:58:04 2015 No.12910472 >>12910450 Her thigh looks too fat and her hands look too shitty.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 08:08:15 2015 No.12910492 File: 81 KB, 640x480, idTNlj48FzpQH.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12910472 There is nothing wrong with the hands!

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 08:24:48 2015 No.12910516 >>12910472 it's called gloves, she wears them normally. thighs look fine, she's not some disgusting anorectic skeleton at least. the hipster-ish "3d" effect is the only problem i can see.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 08:30:05 2015 No.12910522 >>12910450 I really can't say its your best drawing.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 08:54:16 2015 No.12910574 >>12910522 it's not. It's just something I want to draw and share. Did I ever implied that this is my best drawing?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 08:58:38 2015 No.12910591 File: 158 KB, 674x707, comap.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I am getting no where.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 08:59:46 2015 No.12910595 >>12910574 I'm just saying what I think about it. also what's this aggressivity? makes me doubt you're really the author.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 09:12:33 2015 No.12910611 >>12910591 cute characters dude

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 10:13:56 2015 No.12910761 >>12910450 I like hoppou so I like this.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 12:17:22 2015 No.12910985 File: 195 KB, 794x598, Screen Shot 2015-01-14 at 12.15.14 PM.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12893558 >>12895158 here's swimsuit world in its embryonic stage

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 15:29:46 2015 No.12911470 >>12904647 This game looks realy great ive tryed to build a similar game, but in the RPG-Maker VX Ace. If anybody is interested...

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 15:40:30 2015 No.12911493 File: 2.28 MB, 622x432, new camera.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12911470 Post some screenshots! In what ways is it similar? The kidnapping? Rape? Breeding? Lolis?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 16:14:43 2015 No.12911598 >>12911493 There will be car chases, right? Or maybe a full-blown pedo street racing event, where the winner takes the loser's lolis.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 16:15:20 2015 No.12911601 File: 235 KB, 1280x960, dfklgjdkslfg.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Is this a decent trap? He's supposed to be a shota who's constantly dressed in maid clothes because of his sister. I wanted critiques.

Anonymous Wed Jan 14 16:40:27 2015 No.12911701
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>>12911598
>Or maybe a full-blown pedo street racing event, where the winner takes the loser's lolis.

pls no scope creep. There's too much stuff planned already. At this rate I'll never finish it.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 16:43:08 2015 No.12911713 >>12911701 It's time to enter the world of modern game development. It will never be finished because new things will always be added. Make a sturdy and expandable engine and release it with the core features. Which hopefully include loli gambling.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 16:51:03 2015 No.12911748 >>12910985 They still kinda look like Jenny Robot and Rika Nipah. In my opinion, their hands looked better when they had something similar to wrists like in the first image.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 16:55:08 2015 No.12911759 >>12911601 The drawing itself is good, the overall picture isn't very interesting, though. Composition practice is your next stop.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 14 17:03:24 2015 No.12911793 >>12911601 >Is this a decent trap? Does it look exactly like a flat chested girl whether fully clothed or not? If not, no, if so yes.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 15 00:37:58 2015 No.12913102 File: 5 KB, 199x48, pandemonium.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Pandemonium capitol building peeking through the clouds.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 15 00:42:23 2015 No.12913115 >>12913102 Suddenly, a rice ball descends from the heavens!

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 15 00:46:08 2015 No.12913128 >>12913115 ok anon, your comment made me laugh in real-life

>>	MDF Thu Jan 15 14:43:16 2015 No.12914760 Give me the requests!!

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 15 14:54:51 2015 No.12914787 >>12914760 i request you take it easy

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 15 14:58:59 2015 No.12914802 >>12914760 Fan interpretation of swimsuit world >>12893558 >>12910985

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 15 15:00:06 2015 No.12914809 >>12914760 Any Touhou attempting to play DDR but can't because the butt plug they put in prior to entering the arcade is just too massive and causing her to cry.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 15 15:52:42 2015 No.12914961 >>12914760 Kogasa bearing stereoscopic 3D glasses on her forehead. That might be funny.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 15 16:25:31 2015 No.12915037 File: 46 KB, 900x900, jjdjdsjdsjksd132.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] At least the process of creation was enjoyable. That's all that matters, right?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 15 16:30:48 2015 No.12915048 >>12915037 Not really, but that's important. Just erase that fat bird thing above the butterfly, it's hijacking the drawing's overall good silhouette.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 15 16:38:59 2015 No.12915073 >>12915037 There should be a parrot touhou.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 15 20:12:05 2015 No.12915845 File: 133 KB, 1154x727, waterworld.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12914802 he has a unique style

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 15 21:04:18 2015 No.12915965 >>12910280 Why is jpee sfw when nobody here works

>>	Anonymous Thu Jan 15 22:32:45 2015 No.12916219 >>12915965 because moot is a faggot.

Anonymous Fri Jan 16 00:36:09 2015 No.12916593
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>>12915048
I'm always worried about my pictures looking flat, so I keep overlapping objects like there's no tomorrow.
Guess I overdid it this time. Thank you for your input.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 02:56:41 2015 No.12916935 >>12893136 I really like this. Very nice use of lighting

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 03:06:38 2015 No.12916964 >>12916593 You don't use line thickness. Of course it will look flat.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 03:15:13 2015 No.12916987 >>12916593 rip okuu, she was too fat

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 12:35:43 2015 No.12917764 File: 781 KB, 960x540, remilia.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Finished a Remilia. sorry i didn't post any WIP. Was kinda in a hurry. Enjoy.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 12:39:32 2015 No.12917775 >>12917764 Really cool, good palette and contrast. My only complaint go to her rather long feet

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 12:55:07 2015 No.12917809 >>12917764 Nice but there's way too much usage of filters and layer blending modes Could use more contrast, the background takes a lot of focus away from remi, especially the clouds since they're similar colours to her.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 13:10:01 2015 No.12917845 >>12917764 Kinda small. Looks nice though.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 14:04:17 2015 No.12918032 >>12917764 Her hair looks gross.

Anonymous Fri Jan 16 20:07:08 2015 No.12919239
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>>12911748
>>12915845
If anyone is interested in working on Swimsuit World with me, I'm electricgrapes on dA. Help with music, art, story would all be appreciated.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 20:17:49 2015 No.12919270 >>12917764 How long did that take you?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 20:43:30 2015 No.12919326 >>12919239 Isn't music, art and story the only elements you need when making a VN? Programming is almost unnecessary since there are things like Renpy available.

Anonymous Fri Jan 16 20:44:53 2015 No.12919329

>>12919239
What are you looking for in the music department? I might wing some looping stuff. You don't even have to use it if it's shit, but I could use some guidelines as a direction for creating something. Been stuck for a long time now.

Also you might want to make some general information guide about the project to present collaborators, once threads go on dying, it'll be hard to keep track of stuff.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 21:00:39 2015 No.12919366 File: 133 KB, 394x523, temp.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 21:01:04 2015 No.12919369 >>12919366 what happened to skull

Anonymous Fri Jan 16 21:05:18 2015 No.12919379

>>12919326
I'm working on all those elements at the moment, but I think a collaborative effort would make it go quicker and make it more interesting as well.

>>12919329
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NQ0aNHg6p7g

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZWoVOSCsmGY&list=PLCA76D33AE78036E8&index=14

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sDyyFlAB4hU&index=15&list=PLCA76D33AE78036E8

>general information guide about the project to present collaborators
What should I use for that? Github or should I just make a webpage

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 21:06:43 2015 No.12919384 >>12919366 What's this supposed to be

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 21:13:38 2015 No.12919409 >>12919369 i dont believe in skulls

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 21:19:49 2015 No.12919431 >>12919239 You need a writer? I'd like to help. What's your premise?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 21:20:51 2015 No.12919436 >>12919366 I don't know the feeling of being bald and having a banana peel wig then getting some asshole throw a tomato at you, but if I did this picture wold sum it up quite well.

Anonymous Fri Jan 16 21:21:13 2015 No.12919438

>>12919379
Oh, so you haven't established which kind of situations the music will go along with yet? Like dramatic parts, or songs attached to a place, a character.... what kind of ambients will we have? That's important.

But I guess some mellow generic songs wouldn't hurt for these neutral parts, I'll fiddle with it a bit.

>github or webpage?
Even a pastebin would do, there you can write a summary and link other stuff like ref pics, sounds and whatnot. Do how you find to be more organized to you.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 21:22:52 2015 No.12919444 >>12919366 look like a tomato throw on top of a piece of cheese lying on bald head

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 21:25:02 2015 No.12919457 File: 22 KB, 377x523, temp2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12919369 >>12919436 >>12919444 i guess the hairline's too far up?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 21:27:09 2015 No.12919466 >>12919457 now it's a brainslug

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 21:29:12 2015 No.12919474 >>12919457 is that a brain tumor?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 21:34:00 2015 No.12919499 >>12919457 I don't know the feeling of having a jellyfish surgically attached to my head, but if I did this picture would sum it up quite well.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 21:36:43 2015 No.12919513 >>12919438 Thanks. I'll get to work on a page then.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 21:40:44 2015 No.12919532 How do I learn to draw, Jay? Any good tutorials?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 21:42:28 2015 No.12919539 >>12919532 Read /ic/ pinned thread. Then practice a lot. Like daily, at least. No shortcuts.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 21:45:46 2015 No.12919548 >>12919532 loomis loomis is an /ic/ "meme" reverse troll. Basically people say loomis is shit but in reality it's the best book you will read because it's a guide. There is a book thread shared in a mega link, all the books you'll ever need.

Anonymous Fri Jan 16 22:12:59 2015 No.12919599

>>12919239
I would have to say that your "unique" art is going to be the "selling point" of the game. I would only let people help you with background and UI art. As for story, do you have a game plan? Expanding existing work is easy, but finding main story lines and how they need to progress with character description is going to be the hardest part.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 22:14:23 2015 No.12919601 >>12919532 draw fast draw often draw A WHOLE FUCKING LOT do many sketches focusing on a single aspect do finished pieces less often, but DO THEM and FINISH THEM

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 22:34:28 2015 No.12919667 File: 47 KB, 658x1000, 1421465668740.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Any major oversights in anatomy?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 22:35:32 2015 No.12919672 >>12919667 How can she oversee when she has no eyes

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 22:39:26 2015 No.12919688 File: 39 KB, 658x1000, 1421465966981.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12919667 Fixed it for you. No need to thank me.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 22:40:37 2015 No.12919690 File: 238 KB, 900x1000, 1421466037850.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12919672

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 22:40:53 2015 No.12919691 >>12919667 she has no hands

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 22:54:18 2015 No.12919726 >>12919690 That actually looks better without the eyes. Does anyone else like to edit the pictures they save?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 22:56:54 2015 No.12919729 >>12919667 Anatomy is the least of your worries.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 22:57:01 2015 No.12919730 I'm really getting tired of idiots like like >>12919688 thinking that dick jokes are funny.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 23:09:40 2015 No.12919756 >>12919730 How is that a joke? it's more like an improvement.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 16 23:25:16 2015 No.12919792 File: 325 KB, 792x592, Screen Shot 2015-01-16 at 8.03.42 PM.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12919431 >>12919599 http://pastebin.com/ZtnTrvzz Here's a brief synopsis. renpy script linked below as well.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 00:07:45 2015 No.12919895 >>12919792 Planet California sounds so much worse than Swimsuit World. Can't it be former Planet Hawaii? At least the Japanese names would make more sense. Although the names probably aren't supposed to make sense.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 00:30:33 2015 No.12919957 >>12919895 it was called californiaopolis prior to being named swimsuit world (because it is a chunk of earth consisting mostly of the west coast). And yeah its supposed to be a little ridiculous.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 00:37:42 2015 No.12919976 >>12919792 So will there be any ero in this?

Anonymous Sat Jan 17 00:50:05 2015 No.12920029

>>12919792
You should be able to play a girl. When it comes to swimsuit fetish, wearing cute swimsuits yourself is as important as looking at cute girls in swimsuits. This is the yin and the yang of swimsuit appreciation.

Also, are the other worlds all centered on cloth-fetishism? Is there a glasses world? Ribbed sweater world? Maid uniform world?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 00:50:37 2015 No.12920032 File: 81 KB, 640x427, images.duckduckgo.com.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12919792 Thanks taking a look. Just a thought for Sucy, how about she wears a pair of these, seeing how shes nervous?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 01:19:56 2015 No.12920130 >>12920029 Yuri sucks. I, for one, would like to be able to admire cute girls in swimsuits while being a hetero male.

Anonymous Sat Jan 17 01:52:54 2015 No.12920228

>>12919976
I don't know if i'm really capable of drawing ero. but I intend to have some love connections.
>>12920029
i dont know about being able to play as a girl, but the idea of having other clothing fetish worlds is great.
>>12920032
thanks, good idea. i definitely want to accessorize the characters more.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 02:22:32 2015 No.12920320 >>12920029 I'd like some yuri as well. Or otherwise just "friendship".

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 03:08:49 2015 No.12920455 File: 266 KB, 510x850, mayor_of_casterbridge,_last_moments.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12916935 It was a fun little little thing. I'm glad to hear you liked it.

Anonymous Sat Jan 17 03:35:54 2015 No.12920547
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>>12886276
Clip Studio also has something called "post correction" which you can turn on and off in the advanced brush settings.
It edits your stroke after you lay down the line so you don't get "stabilizer lag"
It retains pressure sensitivity and you can get it to draw straight lines perfectly if you max out the settings.

Also I really like the face features. don't change them, but make her skull wider and shorter, and lower her brows.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 03:52:58 2015 No.12920578 File: 65 KB, 551x584, lilykinib.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12920547 Huhn. Were you always in /jp/ threads?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 04:15:37 2015 No.12920623 File: 45 KB, 294x605, 51491ec1338fb822caa65a66264244cc.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12920578 every once in a while

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 08:28:29 2015 No.12921020 >>12920623 >>12920547 Shitty tumblr art

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 08:40:18 2015 No.12921036 >>12921020 How can it be Tumblr if they don't have noses? >>12920547 This looks like it's from onesyota or kariyume.

Anonymous Sat Jan 17 09:59:22 2015 No.12921149
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>>12921036
From this artist? his art is bad and isn't getting much better, it's weird he's actually popular. I guess it's because he produces a lot of content.

>>12921020
The jealousy

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 10:02:16 2015 No.12921154 >>12921149 Yeah by the artist. It looks like a scene from the game since that's basically what the game is about. Also the art is at least on par if not better than >>12920547

Anonymous Sat Jan 17 10:12:07 2015 No.12921167
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>>12921154
>Also the art is at least on par
The anatomy, form, and perspective quality of excess m's artwork is cringeworthy, and these are things he puts out there as finished pieces.

Even if you don't study art... I mean come on.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 10:22:28 2015 No.12921184 >>12921167 >>12921149 Please do not post non-original art here

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 10:27:31 2015 No.12921189 >>12921154 >Also the art is at least on par if not better than >>12920547(You) one is unfinished and the other is inhuman

Anonymous Sat Jan 17 10:38:38 2015 No.12921209

>>12921154
>he art is at least on par if not better than
It's one thing to hate that tumblr style (I dislike it too) but the other artist has no fucking knowledge of anatomy, it's not even on par becuase it lacks basic shit.
What the fuck is even going on with this? >>12921167

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 10:43:30 2015 No.12921216 >>12921149 >>12921167 Disgusting.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 10:48:42 2015 No.12921221 >>12921209 >>12921167 Sorry, but your scribbles with bad anatomy are worse than finished works with bad anatomy, no matter how you try to defend them.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 11:49:14 2015 No.12921328 >>12921221 There's a difference between stylized anatomy and bad anatomy. you might not like the style but it has more fundamental knowledge. Every picture posted in this thread is better than these >>12921149 >>12921167

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 11:51:29 2015 No.12921335 >>12921221 No one's defending that shitty tumblr art And no one with a brain defends those deformed drawings just because they're done by a jap.

Anonymous Sat Jan 17 12:03:12 2015 No.12921368
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>>12920547
ah, i thought that was the stabilizer. i was wondering if there was something somewhere else
i like your art but something about the legs have bothered me, like they're viewed in top-down angle all the time

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 12:20:15 2015 No.12921405 >>12921328 Yeah no, stop defending your shitty art.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 18:29:39 2015 No.12922367 >>12920578 Post the full version.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 19:47:40 2015 No.12922662 File: 202 KB, 600x400, moeru.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] animated adventure

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 19:53:29 2015 No.12922682 >>12922662 boo

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 21:37:51 2015 No.12923008 I can't seem to draw a head at 3/4 Shit makes no sense

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 23:11:37 2015 No.12923288 Which fetish has the most desperate fans? I need to know where the barrier is to get into commissioned work.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 23:12:29 2015 No.12923292 >>12923288 Vanilla fetish.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 23:21:12 2015 No.12923310 >>12922662 uhm uhhh nice

>>	Anonymous Sat Jan 17 23:52:58 2015 No.12923393 >>12923288 Furries, expansion, scat and futa fetishests.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 00:00:16 2015 No.12923415 >>12923288 Diapers, elders, muscles, tickling, inflation. In this order.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 00:05:15 2015 No.12923444 >>12923415 >elders I didn't even know this existed. Diapers and inflation definitely sound the easiest to start with, given the subject matter. When I git gud enough I'll post here for critique.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 00:19:03 2015 No.12923501 File: 80 KB, 825x585, Capture.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] WIP. Doing a fan art.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 00:30:02 2015 No.12923529 File: 93 KB, 478x640, image.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Any tips on how to color and/or draw hair? This is the best I can do.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 02:59:45 2015 No.12923797 File: 97 KB, 600x600, 20150117c.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] hey /jp you guys can be scary sometimes

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 04:23:14 2015 No.12923927 File: 79 KB, 566x800, image.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Designed for the XPLAY contest on Pixiv.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 10:02:33 2015 No.12924659 >>12923797 There is absolutely nothing scary about /jp/

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 11:27:51 2015 No.12924895 >>12923927 Fuggin cute like how you rendered the sleeves, they look poofy and soft.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 12:39:55 2015 No.12925083 I can draw half decently only when I'm horny as HELL. When in a normal state of mind, I can't do anything right and everything looks like shit. Anyone else have this problem?

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 13:00:09 2015 No.12925130 >>12922662 10/10

Anonymous Sun Jan 18 13:22:25 2015 No.12925189

>>12925083
I can't get anything done when I'm horny. But I do have a similar problem.

My issue is that I need to be emotionally invested in subject to pull through the process.
On the "bright side", all of my "published works", even the most horrendous of MSPaint scribbles, have my very soul all over them.
The downside is that - it may sound kind of strange - I need quite a bit of time to regenerate from my job experiences and start feeling anything.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 13:31:22 2015 No.12925219 >>12922662 nice dude >>12923529 doesn't seem too bad currently. look up ribbon hair method >>12923288 most people say furry pays the best but just pick something you actually like, otherwise you'll feel like shit later

Anonymous Sun Jan 18 14:24:52 2015 No.12925369

>>12925189
Feel.

>>12925083
Same. Creativity only comes when I'm in a certain state of mind. But when I'm on this stage, I cannot focus enough to work.

So I have to achieve this altered state of consciousnesses, and then cool down to focus on drawing.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 15:06:13 2015 No.12925487 File: 116 KB, 996x960, IMG_20150118_204235.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12923529 Seconding this. I really can't get a hang on it. Even less than normal shadows.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 15:41:06 2015 No.12925597 >>12925369 Glad to know I'm not the only one.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 17:05:05 2015 No.12925881 >>12925219 It's a good thing I like diapers, then. Furry is way too huge and skilled for someone to make a start in. Look at Mithril07 or darkgem and their favorites. That's the level I'd want if I were to commission something furry.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 18:27:59 2015 No.12926109 File: 207 KB, 665x665, Capture.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>12923501 WIPing...

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 21:41:18 2015 No.12926580 File: 2.46 MB, 2480x2480, New Canvas4.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Something looks fucked, could it be anatomy? Also if you like initial d https://clyp.it/y2gyrnpz

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 21:45:19 2015 No.12926589 >>12923927 how'd the school wars pixiv entry go? Balance the sleeves with something for the lower half, it just makes her legs look small lol

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 21:47:25 2015 No.12926592 >>12917764 jesus it's great how long did that take you to color?

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 21:52:55 2015 No.12926610 >>12926580 Her clothes are too loose/broad, it looks like a hazmat. What the fuck with her fingers, is that the sleeve tip? If soo, it's too finger-like, seems spoopy.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 22:10:42 2015 No.12926658 >>12926610 fuck you're right, need to find references for how actual oversized sweaters look like thanks

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 22:31:37 2015 No.12926704 File: 69 KB, 681x960, 10929186_978226458872087_3006967420647043030_n.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Rena turned out too stumpy, like she got smushed by Ooishi's fat ass or something. Anyway, maggots are cool.

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 22:33:24 2015 No.12926710 >>12926704 Why not fix it?

>>	Anonymous Sun Jan 18 22:38:00 2015 No.12926716 >>12926704 2western looking for me Good linework though

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 19 00:44:41 2015 No.12927167 File: 251 KB, 750x800, landscape_02 copy.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] A distant view.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 19 00:52:58 2015 No.12927194 >>12927167 I can hear the BGM in my head just looking at it.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 19 04:30:36 2015 No.12927826 File: 776 KB, 1200x891, umifaces.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Some Umineko stuff.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 19 07:16:12 2015 No.12928187 >>12924895 >>12926589 Thanks for comments. I'll take more concern on up-low balance next time. And the situation of school wars contest is unknown, and I'm waiting for the result announcement.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 19 13:36:52 2015 No.12929035 >>12927826 i like the skechiness

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 19 13:57:35 2015 No.12929091 thread dead

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 19 13:59:57 2015 No.12929098 File: 159 KB, 515x341, 1119.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] suffering is fun to draw

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 19 14:11:19 2015 No.12929130 >>12929098 cute suffering dude

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 19 14:11:27 2015 No.12929131 File: 2.34 MB, 2160x2160, love explosion.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I wanted to draw muscular cats

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 19 14:22:41 2015 No.12929154 >>12929130 thank you anon >>12929131 kawaii

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