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Hello ladies and gentlemen,

I come in peace, even though I do not belong on this board.

This board is not in any way relevant to my interests nor I ever browse and this is definitely not my home board, however, I think the only board where it is somewhat appropriate to ask for feedback on a piano piece I've been playing, is this one. I am not into Touhou Project at all besides it's music which I find very interesting to listen to and play on the piano. I need feedback on the piece I've been playing, any kind of feedback or criticism is very welcome.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4sYn1eGKuSE

What does the average /jp/ user think?

>> No.9773307

>I come in peace, even though I do not belong on this board.

get out of /jp/

>> No.9773310

I like your hat.

>> No.9773311

bad apple is epic as HELL

>> No.9773313

>>9773307

It's difficult to interpret such a sentence for the simpleminded, stereotypical type of person.

>> No.9773316

I enjoyed listening to this. Thank you for sharing.

>> No.9773334

Come back when your interests are relevant to ours you fucking piece of shit offboarder.

Get the fuck out normalfag dumbshit. Don't even fucking explain to me how you're doing bad apple and you're not even into touhou.

I fucking DARE you to play Touhou games first, THEN make shit about them.

You're not even a secondary, you're a stupid cock-sucking TERTIARY. PLEASE get the fuck out back to whatever gay faggot board you come from.

>> No.9773341

Not flawless, but good enough.

You should practice more on tempo and better video games.

>> No.9773342

>>9773334

lol

>> No.9773361

That YouTube channel.
That hat.
That hair.
That name (Brian Tyler).
That secondaryness.
That /b/ cat picture.
That Modern Warfare 3 video.
That underage.
That huge irrelevant blog entry.

Why is it difficult for people to make a single on-topic thread on jp without fucking up so hard?

>> No.9773370

>>9773361
>That name
Bryan Tyler is the name of the composer of the MW3 theme you tard

>> No.9773399

Stupid looking hat.

The piano sounds okay, but it's a bit too mechanical, if you ask me. At the very least, you should stylize your octave chords in the right hand by making them less solid. Simple variations in tempo doesn't make it non-robotic.

Keep working on it. It will get better as you become more familiar with the piece. I'm surprised you'd post something like this on the internet, actually, I would have given it more time.

>> No.9773410

>>9773370
We don't play modern warfare here, kid. Fuck off back to /v/

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>> No.9773441

You don't know how to make a post, you openly refuse to lurk, you can't play the song worth a damn, and you look like a tool.

Why did you even come to this board?

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>> No.9773487

>>9773370
> MW3

It's called Skyrim, you stupid faggot.

>> No.9773515

Stop trying to put everyone down guys
I liked it OP

>> No.9773517

Nice, Epic, fuck off back to /v/.

>> No.9773562

It was alright. Please leave /jp/ now, you normalfag piece of shit.

>> No.9776431

>>9773304
Work on your finger dexterity. Also, when you play a repeated volley of chords, please do not press them all in the same way.

Also,you REALLY need some better quality. I understand the dilemma, but something like that makes you feel like you're been shouted at the entire time.

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