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General original content/drawthread for /jp/sies. You may use this thread to contribute your works or to share ideas related to possible projects. Anything OC is welcomed; including drawings, writings, music, and programming.

Previous thread:
>>9215078

>> No.9264917

Meduka looks wider than ever before.

Nice pic!

>> No.9264918
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9264918

Well, I play violin and I have some things in the works.

First, I am trying to develop more finger independence, since my muscle memory for playing is dependent on where my first (index) finger is placed, resulting in the rest following. I am working on this by developing muscle memory for the rest of my fingers to do the same, so my 2nd(middle) finger can lead in my 3rd, 4th and 1st by it being placed first. This skill would allow me to play songs like Dance of Witches, where it goes from open A to C, where I would use my 2nd finger.

I also have terrible string transitioning, they are not smooth and it makes it hard to play songs like Infinite Nightmare. Most passages in this song have constant string crossings and with weak skill in that department it is hard to play a song that is high tempo like Infinite Nightmare.

One last bit, songs that get quite high, like say 3rd position E on E string are tricky for me because I can only go as high as D on E string comfortably on 3rd position. I have to learn how to be able to comfortably reach higher than D when I am in high positions. So I need to learn how to stretch my 4th to hit D# and E and learn how to set up for 5th position. Songs like Higan Retour, Gensokyo the gods loved, and Hartmanns Youkai Girl present these problems.

I should do etudes but I don't feel productive with them.

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>>9264917

You stole my joke except it was Hidamari and not Maduka.

>> No.9264933

>>9264918

Oh, and speed and control are always an issue. Those things are very broad skills that come with time and practice. I can't really practice speed without practicing control and to practice control I have to identify what exactly I am having trouble controlling, then work on that and allow my brain to develop muscle memory for that action. So speed is not something that is worked on by itself.

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>>9264894


also can somebody draw the graphics for my dos game?

>> No.9264959

>>9264938
Fuck off sparky

>> No.9264964

I hope Magister comes and improves /jp/ with some of his awesome OC soon.

>> No.9264971

>>9264964
frig off magister

>> No.9264972

>>9264959
Check your fucking entitlement white CIS scum.

>> No.9265000
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9265000

Can someone draw an image of Anzu skateboarding?

>> No.9265030
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>>9265000

Just a WIP from the sketch from before. This time with lines and basic flats. A lot of color is probably going to change as I work on the picture.

I also put my VN work on back burner, it's a bit too difficult to do by myself and no one really knows about the concept. So i'm going to be putting the story and world concepts out in like character primers so anyone can read them if they want to.

>> No.9265034

>>9265030

Oh ignore the quote, forgot to delete it.

>> No.9265038

>>9264972
Fucking racist faggot.

>> No.9265045

>>9265030
I like your girls. Keep on drawing.

>> No.9265137

>>9265045

Thanks, it means a lot

>> No.9265154

>>9265030
I just want to say, you really hurt my feelings by quoting that post and getting my hopes up.

>> No.9265176
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>>9265154

I'm sorry, I like Anzuchan I just don't know how i'd draw her riding a skateboard

>> No.9266186
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>>9265176
Simple. She won't ride the skateboard because it's too much trouble, so she just looks with her typical "you've got to be joking" face when producer shows up with a skateboard for her to use in a promotion, interrupting her psp game.

>> No.9266227
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9266227

Totally patchouli

>> No.9266670
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9266670

tried to make this okuu with all the advice i got from the last thread

... ....

OH NOOOOOO! fakest tits in all of history...worst angle in all of history too

>> No.9266679

>>9266670
You still draw better hands than me though...so that's something.

>> No.9266686

>>9266679
thanks

>> No.9266687
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9266687

>> No.9266688

>>9266687
Your faces are so full of emotion...I cry tears of joy every time.

>> No.9266692

Anyone have any advice on how to get better with a tablet? Is it just a matter of practice, or are there actually new techniques I can learn about, compared to the mouse?

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9266699

>>9266688
thanks, I appreciate it

>> No.9266705

>>9266692
Draw with your shoulder.

>> No.9266718

>>9266227
edgy and dark

>> No.9266889

>>9266670
It's some kind of midget mutant.

>> No.9266985
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9266985

>>9266889
looks like it but that's the angle and my poorly not bending 100% starch skirt she's wearing

>> No.9267423

>>9266985
Oh, so that's what you were trying to tell with your drawing!
The complete lack of three dimensionality confused me.

>> No.9267435

No one replied to my violin post.

It's okay, I know i'm not skilled enough to contribute any original content ;_;. But just you wait, 1 more year and ill be playing at a level where I can record myself and truly inject /jp/ with high quality OC!

>> No.9267442

>>9267435
Magister is the only one who is able contribute high quality OC to /jp/.

>> No.9267453

I usually draw BUT what if I was to sing would that be allowed in this thread?(I could sing some cute girly songs)

>> No.9267459

>>9267442

I don't know who that is, but if you guys actually make these threads just so one guy can post his work while everyone talks about it, it's not really general OC thread, is it?

I find it more fascinating and intriguing to read about peoples journey to competency because you can slowly see how they improve and how it impacts their ability to produce better works.

>> No.9267464

>>9267453
HELL yea it would, bro! Maybe post some cute trap pictures of yourself too so we can look at them while you sing.

>> No.9267472

>>9267464

Ever since I saw that "old /jp/ new /jp" picture I just suddenly hated traps and I lost all will to even attempt to be one.

Guys dressed up as touhous is still really cool , though.

>> No.9267490
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9267490

Working on an Mariϟϟa at the moment.
Still gotta figure out how to shade with the program I'm using.

Btw., "seeking one eye tit" is a great captcha.

>> No.9267520

>>9267435
I'm sorry, I'm here only for drawings.

>> No.9267526

>>9267459
>replying to trolls

>> No.9267536

>>9267464
Sadly I don't think I'm attractive and /jp/ would scold me for taking pictures of myself.

>> No.9267554

>>9267472
I bet you still don't even lift.

Should I do Splatter Faith Sanae or Iku Nagae with a powered rotating drill arm for the next Touhou I dress up as?

>> No.9267599

Does posting Touhou cosplay pictures count as OC?

>> No.9267606

>>9267599

As long as they are yours.

>> No.9267609

>>9267599
From past experience it is if you only post the stuff you've crafted. like the dress itself or whatever props. If you post you wearing the cosplay then it's considered not so good.

>> No.9267702

>>9266227
I like it. more things like this and less cute diabeetus inducing stuff would be appreciated from me.
not that I don't like cute pics, though.

>> No.9267745

>>9267599
I wouldn't start posting 3DPD in here if I were you...

>> No.9267902

>>9267599
No. >>>/cgl/

You can post stuff you crafted by yourself though. Just not wearing it.

>> No.9268232
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9268232

>> No.9268265

>>9268232
Really loved it.

>> No.9268535
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9268535

>>9268232

>> No.9268574

What does mochi taste like?

>> No.9268608

>>9268574
It has an oddly cylindrical taste, and makes your head hurt and eyes feel cold.

>> No.9268707
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9268707

Tried manga-style shading on this one.
How bad did I fail, /jp/?

>> No.9268739

>>9268707

You didn't really fail all that bad, it's just that the dots don't look very manga-ish.

>> No.9268759
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>> No.9268766
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9268766

'Sup /jp/

wonder if OR ever got this

color requests?

>> No.9268788

>>9268707
Commodore 64 bad.

>> No.9269159
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9269159

I want to start drawing, but I don't know how to really begin. I know that it's a bunch of techniques that are meshed together to create something, but I don't know where I should begin when it comes to creating technique

I wanna draw cartoonish drawings, things like >>9268703

Do I just start trying to draw like that? Pic is how I draw at the moment. It's MS paint work and the style and technique are pretty much stagnanted, it cant be improved beyond this. I would need to rehaul my entire drawing skill set (which is, nothing really).

Where do I start?

>> No.9269171

>>9269159
Start by drawing a lot and looking for pictures as references.

>> No.9269179

>>9269171

So basically just, draw A LOT like the way I want to be able to draw, and to start I should use references of styles that I wish to adopt/copy so I have a basis of what I should be working on?

>> No.9269189

>>9269159
Try finding a picture you like and copying it as quickly as possible in MS paint. resize the original to avoid having to alt tab

>> No.9269209

>>9269189

So speed draw? Why do it quickly?

>> No.9269216

>>9269179
Yes, and get a tablet. Also explore more options outside of drawing things like >>9268703 when you can be bothered to.

>> No.9269220

>>9269209
Not him, but when you do it quickly, you commit it to muscle memory better. If you take a very long time trying to copy something, it becomes less like you're drawing and more like you're replicating it , which is not what you want. You just want the basic ideas behind the strokes of the drawing or whatever.

>> No.9269247

>>9269159

Build references, people, clothes, weapons, clouds, whatever and draw. Draw a lot. Draw every day for years.

You're going to likely absolutely hate every that you draw unless you are completely conceited that it's amazing. Hold onto this hatred, because it's how you will push yourself to become better. Artists who don't have themselves enough stagnate.

>> No.9269278

Who is OP by the way?

>> No.9269280

>>9269159
The secret to drawing is to use references, Mark Crilley said so.

>> No.9269285
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9269285

>>9269247
Yes indeed,
don't worry if you hate everything that you draw for years

>> No.9269299

>>9268766
and Here's the source image on that, someone was asking about it last thread
http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/644799

>> No.9269309

>>9266227

MOAR!

Yakumo Yukari-sama next make sure the gap is in, I think it fit real well for you

And then Yamae

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>>9266186

I'm probably going to take some liberty with this a bit and probably draw Producer-san trying to get Anzu to ride it at the X-games or something.

>> No.9269326

>>9269285
Not that anon but hopefully I'll be able to draw hot pictures before I lose the ability to pop a boner. (the anon who drew okuuu earlier)

>> No.9269366

>>9269326
Maybe you're over thinking it. Most people just sketch stuff for fun, if you're trying to become a real artist then I don't think asking 4chan is the right way to go.

>> No.9269407

>>9269366
Not that anon that you're thinking off but yeah.

>> No.9269451

>>9269278
Magicstar

>> No.9269469

>>9269451

That's too similar to Magister if I get a non repeating digit post I herby rename Magicstar to NSH

NEO SKETCH HIDAMARI

>> No.9269487

>>9267459

It's more likely that no one here knows a thing about violins than anything else.

Most of the music OC that occasionally pops up in these threads are remixes made with a computer.

>> No.9269514

>>9269309
yukari eh?

>> No.9269516

>>9269469
Well, that's that.

>> No.9269525

>>9268759
Why do Mokou fit so well as a basketball player?

>> No.9269528

>that feel when using references is plagiarizing
Is there a loophole I should know about?

>> No.9269540

>>9269528
Some references have permission rights. Usually when you find a ref from a place that deals out a lot of them, it says whether you can use it commercially or not.

>> No.9269553

>>9269528

Woah now.

References isn't tracing. You are not copying a work. You are looking at it, and using it as a guide to understand clothes, lighting, a post, body mechanics, whatever. References are never, ever illegal, ever in any way.

Tracing is

There is a BIG difference.

>> No.9269621

>>9269309
>MOAR!
>Yukari-sama
>Yamae

Go back to whatever place you came from.

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9269678

>>9269309
Yukarin

>> No.9269712
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>>9269678

Not sure how I feel about this but I guess I'll save it anyway...th-thanks.

>>>/x/

>> No.9269830

Do photoshops qualify as original content?
I used to make so many clever ones in 2008, and they still get posted to this day. I haven't made any since then, though I feel somewhat motivated to.

>> No.9270118
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9270118

I went ahead and started doodling for the first time in my life.

I learned that with making these kinds of heads, its about making a base with a simple shape (like an oval), then detailing the oval with accessories like hair, or a hat, band, whatever. Also giving the shape eyes and stuff.

So if I were to improve on this, I would have to learn how to make hair that looks good, then once I have my little blob with hair, I can put eyes and a mouth or whatever which are all little techniques on their own. So it's all about putting all of these together to create a finished product. For this specific kind of drawing, that is the break down of the techniques I should individually work on to create a good piece of work.

God I love that fucking Marisa. You know which one.

>> No.9270128

>>9269712
Grow some balls fucking pussy cunt. It's not even scary.

>> No.9270144
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9270144

Colour request. The PSD is all fucked up thanks to my incompetence.

>> No.9270236
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>>9270144
Swastika is WRONG!
Please make it right!

>> No.9270251
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9270251

>>9270236
Done, also there was a button missing

>> No.9270342

>>9270128

Internet Tough guy appeared

what is your command?

[ ]run
[ ]fight
[ ]report
[ ]magic
[x]laugh

>> No.9270352

>>9270342
You chose the secret "[x] shitpost" option.

Reported for hacking into the game.

>> No.9270357

>>9270236
Pretty sure the swastika goes both ways. Pointed counter clockwise was "pease" and clockwise was "war". They just never got around to counter clockwise.

At least thats what my social studies teacher taught us in the 3rd grade, decades ago.

>> No.9270369

>>9270357
>pease
shame he wasn’t your english teacher

>> No.9270371

>>9270357
>"pease"
Decades being yesterday.

>> No.9270373

>>9270369
I had English for summer school, every year.

>> No.9270382

>>9270373
it shows

>> No.9270789

What to draw...

>> No.9270821

>>9270789
A little girl in an SS uniform

>> No.9270839

>>9270821

>>>/stormfront/
>>>/b/
nazi's are not moe' or funny

>>9270789

think about what you want to draw then draw the opposite

>> No.9270849

>>9270839
Everything can be cute in 2D. It's time to move on from the past.

>> No.9270858

>>9269830
No.

>> No.9270874

>>9269678
Nice.

>> No.9270875

>>9270839
I think girls wearing uniforms are pretty moe, specially nazi uniforms.

>> No.9270931

>>9270839
Moe and funny are both subjective.
What you meant to say was
"I'm a weeping vagina brainwashed by ZOG to be offended by the stylish uniforms and symbolism of a long dead empire"

>> No.9270941

>>9270931
Nazism is objectively evil and if you support it you should be executed for hate crimes

>> No.9270988

>>9270941
3/10

>> No.9271222
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9271222

we don't need no water
let that big-tittied girl burn

>> No.9271291 [DELETED] 

>>9271222
Hello Mags

>> No.9271308 [DELETED] 

>>9271291
pls respond

>> No.9271589 [DELETED] 

>>9271308
no

>> No.9271590 [DELETED] 

>>9271589
Yes

>> No.9271595 [DELETED] 

>>9271590
>sage
Not him but you have NO RESPECT, NONE AT ALL. I WILL FUCKING SUE YOU!

>> No.9271597 [DELETED] 

>>9271595
wat

>> No.9271619
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>>9271595
What does your post have to do with the quote?

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>>9271619
your post is mean :o

>> No.9271775

>>9271222
look, if you just post the pic without saying anything its fine, eh

>> No.9271849

Fucking idiots, I hate you all. I will never find a community that takes easy and isn't egocentric.

>> No.9271874

>>9271222
I want to see the full drawing.

>> No.9271907
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9271907

Thank you for drawing my dream 2hu. I will keep it safe forever

>> No.9272087

You guys take requests, right?
Why don't you draw a carton of Sunny Milk?

>> No.9272098

>>9271907
KILL IT WITH FIRE

>> No.9272117

>>9271222

She's flat...

>> No.9272150

>>9272145

Boku no Pico

>> No.9272145

>>9270144
>>9270251
what anime is she from

>> No.9272163

>>9271907
Is that a mullet?

>> No.9272562

Draw more catgirls in sweaters.

>> No.9272572

>>9272562
how do i draw cat girls and how do i draw sweaters

>> No.9272582
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>>9272572
Use this as an example.

>> No.9272597
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9272597

behold!

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9272605

>>9272597

>> No.9272614
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9272614

>>9272605

>> No.9272620
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9272620

>>9272614

>> No.9272623

>>9272605
>>9272614
>>9272597
>>9266699
>>9266687
You're like Rustle, only being able to draw one face.

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9272624

>>9272620

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9272629

>>9272623

>> No.9272637

>>9272629
Yes...it would seem that would be his face when tracing it.

>> No.9272730

>>9270858
Fair enough.

>> No.9272737

>>9272562
I'll give it a shot some time?

>> No.9272742

>>9272737
And I shall be here, waiting for the day it happens. Looking forward to it, my friend.

>> No.9272773

>>9272623

Rustle's faces at least end up attractive, he's more like ZUN in that he can only draw one face and even that looks like shit

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9272782

>>9272773
ur mom looks like shit

>> No.9272794

>>9272782

Hey OC is for good real artist only take this DA babby's first MSpaint shit back to DA or Misty Stuffer

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9272800

garry from Ib

>> No.9272806

>>9272794
so, why don't you post some OC then, faggot?

>> No.9272808

>>9272794
Agreed, if he keeps spamming then I'll just sue him for wasting moot's bandwidth.

>> No.9272922
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9272922

OC

>> No.9272927

>>9272922
Jesus christ, stop that.

>> No.9272967 [SPOILER] 
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9272967

It's hunting ants which were stealing sugar.

>> No.9273455

>>9272800
Can you draw the whole body too?

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9273469

>>9272742
Fuck folds, fuck wrinkles, fuck feet, fuck shoes, fuck hair but here's of what's to come...

Image is random cat girl in sweater. if you cant tell the shoes are winter boots wit fur on top

the inking part is where I mess up the most sadly.

>> No.9273493

>>9273469
Fatal error motherfucker. Where's the goddamn tail? I don't see her dangly bits anywhere! I hope this is changed by the final version! I'm horribly offended.

>Fuck folds, fuck wrinkles, fuck feet, fuck shoes, fuck hair

I know how you feel, bro. But keep it up. I'm looking forward to you finishing it.

>> No.9273507

>>9273493
I couldn't find any cat girls with sweaters on with tails, I think I'll just wing it then...prolly will just be round like a lion's?

>> No.9273515

>>9273469
Her right arm isn't attached to the elbow, not to mention it just seems to disappear behind her head. The legs are too short compared to the thighs (or thighs too long, whichever you prefer). She's leaning so far back that with her head in that position, her neck would snap - rotate the image so that the torso is upright and you'll see. On the same note, her left boob isn't quite where it should be.

Concerning folds, your best bet is to use references a lot.

A decent try otherwise.

>> No.9273529

>>9273515
Thanks for the crits, i'll see what I can do

>> No.9273532
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9273532

Speaking of references

>> No.9273536
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9273536

>> No.9273546
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9273546

If anything, posting with sage should be allowed to be faster instead of slower, goddamnit

>> No.9273567

>>9273507
Essentially. I mean, the sweater wouldn't affect the tail much anyway, so any tail you want would work.

>> No.9273582

>>9273553
>>9273546

Which book of the series is this from?

>> No.9273592

>>9273582
Famous Artists Course, apparently.

http://sevencamels.blogspot.fi/

Seems I wasted my time uploading those pics.

>> No.9273651

>>9273592
Maybe adding some useful links like this in the OC thread would be a good idea...

>> No.9273674

>>9273651
The OP does this in the /ic/ thread, but apparently they hate anime.

>> No.9273725

Attempting to make my own acoustic version of tomboyish daughter

http://vocaroo.com/i/s01oKymyCpGB

>> No.9273746

>>9273674
Yeah, they started putting a sticky after the first mod appeared after years.
also, they hate anime style like /jp/ hates anime, so the situation is pretty bearable.

>> No.9273796

>>9273725
Did Cirno die or something?

>> No.9273896

>>9273725

Your instrument sounds so smooth and fresh. I play violin and mine sounds god awful. Even when I try to focus on my sound and play really slow, paying attention to my bow stroke it still just sounds bleh.

Maybe it's because it's a 200 dollar violin that my brother bought and I have 18 dollar set of metal strings.

>> No.9275000
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9275000

I'm blind to my own mistakes, tell me what's wrong here before I start coloring it.

>> No.9275013

>>9275000
...besides Holo's left hand being mirrored

>> No.9275408
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9275408

>>9273469
Here is the final outcome. any crits would be great if ya want

>> No.9275882 [DELETED] 
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9275882

>> No.9275972

>>9275882
You are really trying to kill me, aren't you?

>> No.9276048

>>9275882
Oh hey, that's how I sleep too, minus the right hand wrapping around (because it takes energy to hold it like that).

A note, her upper right leg should point lower (say, towards the calf of the left leg) if her foot is gonna be lower, otherwise it looks like she's got one leg 8 inches longer than the other.

I hope you'll post more, it's very cute.

>> No.9276077

>>9276048
That's her left leg on top, it's fine.

>> No.9276091

>>9276077
It's not fine, her right foot is an entire foot's length lower, thus her leg has to reach that far. The knees are shown at the same place due to the angle coming out of the hips. Therefore, the bottom half of the right leg is way too long.

>> No.9276108

>>9276091
This guy is right.

But then again, it shouldn't be too much work to fix it. Nor it's that big of a mistake.

>> No.9276118

>>9275000
Dunno but I like your Horo.

>> No.9276123

>>9275000
something about horos face seems familiar
especially the mouth

>> No.9276240
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9276240

>>9276048
Thank you very much, anon! I wasn't sure what was wrong before, but that's why I posted.

>> No.9276274

>>9276240
Nothing changed. I'm Keanu! I know Kung-fu!

>> No.9276348

I wish I could draw, or paint, or something.

>> No.9276409

>>9276348
Just try your best and keep posting your work, we love to see progress.

>> No.9276485

>>9276240
Looks good. I'll keep an eye out for you on these threads, hope to see more.

>> No.9276650
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9276650

Shit, I must be the messiest sketcher ever ever. But does anyone think they can help me with the pose? she's supposed to be falling or something.

>> No.9276671

>>9276650
disregard it, there's nothing to help here but to start again
and again and again
try to learn anatomy too by reading up on material for aspiring artists

>> No.9276690

>>9276671
Yeah, I know, I probably should..

>> No.9276710

>>9276650
What I see:

Legs: the other one would be bent underneath, as she's slightly falling leftward. Most people use the leg closest to the fall to try to break the fall first, so the left leg would be bent and the right one extended to try to maintain balance.

Her right arm seems unexciting - if she's grasping for something and failing it'd be fully extended, fingers especially. Note that she would only be grasping for something if there's something there (even if it's just a wall) - here, nothing is shown, and the way she's falling and looking implies there shouldn't be anything.

In general, her pose is too composed and secure, as if it were static. Try to visualize the motion from the start of the fall - why she got there, and what little motions would happen because of that. Her left arm (relaxed), neck (straight, slightly downward but normal), and lack of torso twist (which would happen with a desperate grasp) all show that she's not that stressed by falling, which is obviously bad.

Running out of characters and patience for writing stuff, hope this helps.

>> No.9276837

>>9276650
Also, raising her shoulder when she reaches out (especially under stress) would help.

>> No.9277551

>> No.9277871

>>9275408
Man, my eyes. Perhaps some colors would do it better aside from just whatever you tried to do here.

>> No.9278424

>>9276240
Her right hand should be "dead", it's pressing on the pillow and instead it should be laying there, muscles are completely relaxed when sleeping.

The head should be pointing a little more to her front, in that postion it looks like her neck is completely twisted.

>>9276650
Legs are incredibly short
Position is unnatural
Left shoulder looks fairly bad, oyou should redraw it and make a line between both shoulders and the neck
The bending of her pelvis is not correct, it looks like she was bending side ways.

Those are the main problems, then if her clothes are respecting air resistance her hair should too.

>> No.9278775

>>9277871
I'm not that good at colors but i guess I'II give it another shot in my next project...

>> No.9278914
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9278914

Sprote this yesterday. Probably gonna sprite again tonight, really lazy.

>> No.9278996

>>9278914
Liking the style

>> No.9279049
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9279049

Not really much going on now, pretty early state.
Is the screen looks too crowded?

>> No.9279054

>>9279049
Could use simpler health bars...

>> No.9279077

>>9278914
That's nice.

>> No.9279098

Whatever happened to that guy who was making that loli rape simulator? Is that project still active?

>> No.9279230

>>9279098
No, apparently it was illegal in his country.

>> No.9279247

>>9279230
Whatever, more like that fag lost interest.

But I actually just suspect you are lying to me.

>> No.9279267

>>9278914
Oh, nice to see someone making sprites.

>> No.9279320

>>9279054
Yea, i thought so. Perhaps making it smaller and semi-transparent will do better.

>> No.9279322

>>9279098
He's alive, just posting in /vg/'s dev threads instead of here.

>> No.9280482
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9280482

Well yeah, Pyontas eyes are too small...
And the colo isn't finished yet. But who cares.

>> No.9280529

>>9279049
whats this?

>> No.9281816
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9281816

Managed to get a bunch of work done, almost nothing of which is visible here. Shit's modular as fuck though and it's dead simple to write stuff like different kinds of tiles and movement.

I'll try to finish that S&W drawing tomorrow.

>> No.9281991

>>9281816
is this ganna be an mmorpg?

>> No.9282128

>>9281991
The dumb act aside, I was actually thinking of checking out how WebSockets work at some point.

>> No.9282143

>>9282128
Oh, you're working with canvas? I'm making a networked platformer with WebSockets right now, they're pretty straight forward.

>> No.9283004

Does anyone fap to their own work?

>> No.9283069

>>9283004
i do, both to my own oc and animu/game/etc character stuff.

i learned to draw so that i had my own fap material, instead of having to rely on others. thanks to that i have fap material of stuff that wasn't ever drawn by anyone else too.

>> No.9283400

>>9283004
Yes. Works amazingly well.

>> No.9283518

>>9283400
>>9283069
Well, alright then...

>> No.9283702

>>9283004
Why bother if you can just fap to them with imagination anyways?

>> No.9284289 [SPOILER] 
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9284289

Lewd

>> No.9284323

>>9284289
Man chest.

>> No.9284742

>>9280529
Our circle's Work-in-Progress game.
head to mintsphere.com if interested.

>> No.9285872

Whatever happened to the guy drawing several Marisa requests?

>> No.9285961

>>9280529
http://www.mintsphere.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/tripri.png

That's some nice art.

>> No.9286052

>>9284742
Does your artist like Ooyari Ashito by chance?

>> No.9286921

>>9286052
Yes.

>> No.9287663

>>9285872

Still on it.
Search through the pic in this thread, you will find some outlines.

>> No.9288960
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9288960

Sometimes I wish I could live alone so I can draw [loli] and fap whenever I want. Was working on this and then parents came. Being NEET is so hard.

>> No.9289611
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9289611

one of these days I'll draw a background

>> No.9289615

>>9289611

Looks nice d00d.

>> No.9289861 [SPOILER] 
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9289861

well heres the sketch, had trouble placin the nips n tits but i think the chest is about correct...

anyway i guess i'll ink n color it tomorrow

censored because lewd

>> No.9289875

>>9289861
Nice saggy tits.

>> No.9289893

>>9289875
the opposite of saggy is round...so i guess i'll make it more round then? second guesses myself

>> No.9289899

>>9289893
Either flat or pointy if you're making lolis.

>> No.9291053
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9291053

Fun times, guys.

>> No.9291646

>>9291053
Grief it?

>> No.9292757
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9292757

Me and my friends had a drawing contest.

>> No.9292867

>>9285961
>>9284742
Well, it loks all professional and shit.
awesome.
good luck guys.

>> No.9293686
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9293686

>>9291053
Original

>> No.9293930
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9293930

>>9291053
>even has a dancing nigger
OH MY GOD.
The best.

>> No.9293941

>>9291053
Needs more Snoop Dogg.

>> No.9294009
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9294009

>>9293930
> dancing nigger

the fuck did you just say, little bitch?

>> No.9294040
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9294040

>>9294009
Pump that up, G

>> No.9294239

Someone should get this: >>9294208
and draw Reimu with Master Chief's armor and a silly helmet. Actually, the armor doesn't matter, what's important is the silly helmet.

>> No.9294513 [SPOILER] 
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9294513

>>9289861
So I decided to go with the fully flat chest version... WHY DOESN'T IT EVER COME OUT HOW I IMAGINE IT?! now i need to study color theory and all things related to that like shading, damn it there's too much studying involved, fuck! i don't even think manga studio is suited for coloring. I should have also tried drawing the body like I did with the eyes instead of using the curve tool, well i think i'll try that in the next project. shit, and here i thought this would come out good. GGGGRRRRRRR. it's like im taking 1 step forward and 2 step back every time.

censored because lewd? but take a look at it if you want a good laugh. Any criticism is greatly appreciated!

>> No.9294545

>>9294513
Usually there is some sort of line between the breasts to define them, especially if they're flat. That way, it doesn't look like two dots on a body.
Don't ask me what I mean, because I know nothing about drawing, maybe someone can explain better than me

>> No.9294561

>>9294545
oh yeah, there was some line between the breasts in the sketch, i must have colored over it that i forgot it was there and forgot to ink it.

>> No.9294682

>>9294513
Never give up kid.

>> No.9294904

>>9294513
Arms are too muscular for a loli, make them thinner.

Stop using whatever it is you're doing with the black dots, and use other colors than pure blue/red/yellow.

I'm not good at anatomy so someone else will be able to give you more useful pointers when it comes to drawing.

Read >>9269285 and keep trying.

>> No.9294927

>>9294904
>>9294682
Duly noted, just a few more years of raging and loathing ought to do the trick.

>> No.9295163

>>9267490
>>9270144
>>9270251
So you're here! I've been looking for you!

>> No.9295342

>>9295163
What do you mean?

>> No.9295369

>>9295342
For the results of your art. Aren't you the anon that made a thread asking for people to tell what kind of suit they want on the Marisa you were drawing? The OP said he'd do nazi Marisa, overly with-like Marisa and pirate Marisa.

>> No.9295903
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9295903

>>9289615
thx dude

An earlier sketch I decided not to use. Seemed like a waste to just let it rot on my computer though.

>> No.9296268

>>9295903
I like more your sketch than your pic.

>> No.9296277

>>9296268
Her hand isn't weird like the first one.

>> No.9296294

>>9296277
And the faces, the sketch looks like a bored Korbo with a sketched Kraft, but the first pic faces looks like some inbreed rednecks cosplaying S&W.

>> No.9296342

>>9296268
>>9296294
I can sympathize, but I just feel there's something essential lacking. With the other picture I was focused on clothing practice instead of the characters so I didn't care half as much.

>>9296277
Oh for fuck's sake, how sleepy was I last night not to notice that

>> No.9296347

>inbreed rednecks
I'm not seeing it. Korbo looks more like Korbo in the first one to me.

>> No.9296378

>>9296342
Well, I didn't read the filename, my fault.

The cloth folds, color and shadowing are pretty.

BTW, have more unfinished sketches?

>> No.9296408
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9296408

>>9296378
Not really. I quickly sketched this yesterday too but didn't think it was good enough for much anything. Still don't, there's mistakes here and there and it's too boring to draw any better.

>> No.9296457

>>9296408
>it's too boring to draw any better.

I can't blame you, this is /jp/ "let he who isn't lazy, cast the first stone"

>> No.9297110

saaaaaaaaaafe

>> No.9297119

>>9297110
セーフだ。

>> No.9297144

>>9297119
Weird, it's like you're me...

>> No.9297149

>>9297119
>>9297144
Samefag

>> No.9297167

>>9297149
...what?

>> No.9297269

>>9297167
Just having some fun

>> No.9298417

This is a slightly unusual request.

I need a picture of Youmu's swords and Yuyuko's fan. For a tattoo, so not too many details, but enough to make them recognizable on sight.

>> No.9298757
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9298757

started drawing Rhyme since I'm listening to TWEWY's soundtrack. not gonna finish. but turns out i'm super good at following references even if normally i can't draw for shit

>> No.9300832
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9300832

I drew a patchouli yukkuri in paint.
How'd I do?
Never drawn with a mouse before...

>> No.9300855

>>9273725
I like it. You should give some other songs a try.
I'd especially like to hear Locked Girl (Pache's theme).

But seriously, it's a great start, dude.

>> No.9300861

>>9300855
You are him?

>> No.9300889

>>9300855
What? No, I just liked the Cirno's theme he posted....???

>> No.9300894

>>9300889
Sorry, this response was meant to be directed at >>9300861

>> No.9300904

>>9300832
Looks more like Konata than a yukkuri.

>> No.9300914

>>9300904
Just the face, you mean?
Should I have made an angry face?

>> No.9300925
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9300925

>>9300914
Not him but it should look more menacing. Reimu in top left, mean eyes but smiling sort of thing.

>> No.9300945
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9300945

>>9300925
Like this??

>> No.9300955

>>9300945
Nice.

>> No.9300956
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9300956

>>9300925
or is this mouth better?

>> No.9300958
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9300958

>>9300945
Now it just looks retarded.

>> No.9300960

>>9300955
Thanks!

>> No.9301598 [SPOILER] 
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9301598

Enjoy the last drawing I made, three months ago. I have to show it to someone at some point.
sage for not /jp/, spoiler for deuclidation of right arm prospective and proportions

>> No.9303317

bampu to the rescue THIS *whips out sage*

>> No.9304001

Any coloring tips? What do you use to color?

What do YOU >>9289611 use?

>> No.9304081

>>9304001
Photoshop

>> No.9304124

>>9304081
This was 9289611 responding, by the way.

would've been simpler if just used my old trip

>> No.9304787

>>9300904
I'm ok with this.

>> No.9304837
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9304837

I can't be bothered to finish
Lost all my motivation to learn how to draw any more

>> No.9304930
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9304930

>>9304837
I know what you mean, I have to study skirts a lot more before I finish this project. I know this current skirt I drew falls under the impossible_clothes tag.

>> No.9305343
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9305343

I only ever draw Miku but Meiko and Kaito are my favorites.

>> No.9305441

>>9305343
Impressive Mags, but your same-eyes are making a comebac, and her left breast looks a bit odd.

>> No.9305467

>>9304930
from the thumbnail it looked like she had a massive dick.

>> No.9305525

>>9305467
Sorry...I'll try to avoid the final outcome's thumbnail from looking like that.

>> No.9305579

>>9305343
Awesome. What do you use for coloring? Please respond.

>> No.9305864

>>9305441
>her left breast looks a bit odd
This. I don't think it is squeezed up nearly enough considering the size of the right one and the position of her left arm. I can't complain about those eyes since I personally really like the way he does them.

>> No.9305876

>>9305864
I like them too, but he was starting to get better at making them not be lolsame-eyes and it seems he's reverted slightly.

>> No.9305882 [DELETED] 
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9305882

>>9305876
>same-eyes
But Mags never even does tsurime. They're clearly not the eyes he always does.

>> No.9305900

>>9304930
when in doubt, reference it out
grab a sheet, wrap it around yourself, find a mirror, strike a pose

>> No.9305910

>>9305882
You must not have known Magister's style very long then. Overall he's improved greatly, but those eyes are still a big problem.

>> No.9305918

>>9305900
I like the way you think...Thanks for the tip!

>> No.9305925

>>9301598
I can't decide whether or not I liked that movie.

>> No.9306056

>>9305918
this one guy i knew liked to say "if you want to learn how to draw french fries in the rain, draw french fries in the rain." i forget who he attributed that quote to.

>> No.9306767
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9306767

>>9305441
>>9305864
Hopefully this is better. I had to change the BG as well, CMYK format absolutely destroyed my purples.

>>9305876
The eye shape I drew for Meiko this time is a lot sharper than when I draw Miku or my own characters, so I didn't get that impression at all. I've changed my eyes three times in the past couple of months, but is it really that bad? If so, what do you suggest?

>> No.9306804
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9306804

>>9306767
>If so, what do you suggest?

I'm not an artist, so I can't offer solutions to problems, I can only point them out as I see them. ;_;

>> No.9308025

>>9306767
What a dick.

>> No.9310716

>>9306767
It's kinda distracting that the outline around the breasts is thinner than everywhere else.

>> No.9310885

One of these days I'm going to contribute something to these OC threads. But not today.

>> No.9310939

>>9310885
Same here. Right now I'm just a bit tired...

>> No.9312217

threads ganna die after this post anyways

>> No.9312712
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9312712

DIE.

>> No.9313959
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9313959

>> No.9314755

>>9306767
What? The eyes are fine. There has been a radical difference in the eyes you've been drawing Magister. Your eyes change every time you draw them it looks like now. Besides, same eyes? I can understand same face, but same eyes is ridiculous unless it's literally the same every time.

>> No.9314766

>>9313959
Color it.

>> No.9315036

>>9313959
Needs a bigger hat

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9315647

Do garage kits count as original content?

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