/jp/ - Otaku Culture

[Princess of the Crystal !!icIm/7OlYEI No.]

New Phantasmagoria of Lotus Deity, for those interested.

http://radtouhoucomic.tumblr.com/

[TODBOB !8Wa6OGPmD2 No.]

awesome

[Anonymous No.]

I liked it, but it got really randumb. I know this kind of comic works on that, but it could benefit from some consistency rather than it going all over the place.

I can't believe were this late, AGAIN

[Herro Eberinynan~ ヽ（＾ω＾）ﾉ !Hg4MMoEMoE No.]

thats actually pretty great

[Princess of the Crystal !!icIm/7OlYEI No.]

>>8383316

I guess you'd appreciate it a bit more if you'd read some Pokey the Penguin lately.

http://yellow5.com/pokey/

I'm trying not to fall into the trap of ROFL so randum xD but at the same time I think people are irrationally put off by "random" humour purely because of that meme and it's derivatives. There's nothing wrong with a bit of nonsense now and again.

[Anonymous No.]

>>8383342

But it has TOO much random, look at the ending. It's very disappointing.

[Anonymous No.]

About fucking time.

[Anonymous No.]

>Yukari's guest appearance

YES

[Princess of the Crystal !!icIm/7OlYEI No.]

>>8383359

I dunno, the ending makes sense to me. Eirin probably has a lot of strange medicines lying around, and a bunch of Poirot clones coming into Eientei would probably mistake them for fine Belgian wine.

That, or under Pokey logic, you could mistake Belgians for the Dutch, and the dutch have a liberal attitude towards soft narcotics.

I just wanted to do a Pokey one, when I come up with ideas for the regular SB&HJ style or something entirely different I'll post more. Not going to force it though.

[Anonymous No.]

>>8383398


The comic introduces something completely new at the end of the comic and thats where it spoils.

Eirins cough medicine comes out of no where.

The magic comic ends so abruptly and randomly (in the bad way)

The girlfriend comic couldve been good but dolls? Couldve used Alice to be WAY funnier than it was. Ended abruptly, again.

Then the birthday comic, is self explainatory just look at the 2 random pictures at the last panels
Good comic, but it has a terrible terrible time ending its pages.

[Princess of the Crystal !!icIm/7OlYEI No.]

>>8383428

I dunno, have you read the comics I'm basing it off? Both Pokey & Sweet Bro & Hella Jeff tend to end on rather odd notes.

I'm not saying these aren't normally concerns with a funny webcomic, but given the genre of "entertainingly shit", I don't think they're necessarily appropriate here.

[Anonymous No.]

>http://radtouhoucomic.tumblr.com/
>tumblr.com

You got me. This is hilarious.

[Anonymous No.]

>>8383466

The Hella Jeff comics I've read always had a central point and it wraps up. It does not introduce something big at the end of its comic.

Lets use the magic comic as an example. Reimu visits marisas place to teach her how to use magic. Marisa is reading a magazine about boys because she's on her leisure time (because shes home). Comic is getting good. Now she's teaching her how to use magic, even when Reimu is holding the wand the same way every time marisa is getting really mad at her inability to hold a magic wand properly and its really funny. Then Reimu fucks up magic and everythings distorted. It couldve ended there and been a great comic. The Yukari saves them both, couldve ended here and been okay (not as good as ending it before) and THEN they are in russia and they say some randumb comment.

Ahhhh!!! Hella Jeff does not go from Point A to H, the thing about hella jeff is that it all ties together even when it seems so absurdly random. Thats why its funny!

The comics start great, then sour in the end.

[Anonymous No.]

Okay, the comic was good but the last thing you need to do is explain the joke and make a fool out of yourself.

[Princess of the Crystal !!icIm/7OlYEI No.]

>>8383512

How many SB&HJ have you read?

Possible the most famous strip has an ending essentially out of nowhere.

http://www.mspaintadventures.com/sweetbroandhellajeff/?cid=007.jpg

And this one -

http://www.mspaintadventures.com/sweetbroandhellajeff/?cid=025.jpg

It's meant to be stoner humour, an occasional non-sequitor is expected. The reason it stands out more in PoLD is that it's relatively more coherent since it's harder to inject the Touhou content otherwise.

[Princess of the Crystal !!icIm/7OlYEI No.]

>>8383533

Yeah, I thought of that, but discussion keeps the thread alive longer.

[Princess of the Crystal !!icIm/7OlYEI No.]

Plus I think it's actually a pretty line of discussion, as people have become really cynical with humour these days.

[Anonymous No.]

>>8383569
At the cost of the point of the thread? No thanks.

[Anonymous No.]

>>8383563

The first link has a premise AND ITS EXACTLY WHY ITS FUNNY. He is pretending to be worried about his socks so he has an opportunity to trash his car! Thats why its BRILLIANT. Its not bad randumb xD at all!

The 2nd comic is ehh, I can't appreciate it. Maybe if it was the guy in the air scoping out hot bitches it'd be funny to me.

[Anonymous No.]

>>8383572
I am pretty open with my humor and laugh at almost everything. Although even I didn't think that shit you posted was funny.

[Princess of the Crystal !!icIm/7OlYEI No.]

>>8383589

Fair enough, I'll stop. It's not for everyone and you have to be careful not to be dragged into /jp/'s autism.

[TODBOB !8Wa6OGPmD2 No.]

dont think, feel, and you will be geromy

[Anonymous No.]

>>8383597

Wow, that actually makes a lot of sense

[Anonymous No.]

>>8383617
Geromy is tanasinn?
Tanasinn is niggers?

I don't know what to feel.

[Anonymous No.]

>>8383818

Someone needs to put SUDO in this.

[Anonymous No.]

>>8383818
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[Anonymous No.]

>>8383909

And Tokiko!

[Anonymous No.]

This one sucked compared to the others.

[Princess of the Crystal !!icIm/7OlYEI No.]

>>8384247

Oh well, can't win them all. Will be making more anyway. I can't make any promises with regards quality but I'll try my best!

[CuteLittleGirl !A7W/F.LWIE No.]

Make the next chapter Tokiko and Raymoo smoking wed they bought from Merusa.

[Anonymous No.]

these aren't funny they're actually quite soulless please get a new artist he's a jerk

[Tokiko No.]

I have a tumblr, too!

http://tokikojp.tumblr.com/

[Tokiko No.]

>>8385227,1
Changed to http://namelessyoukai.tumblr.com/

[Anonymous No.]

test

[Anonymous No.]

>>8385227,1
>>8385227,2
where's your squiddy tumblr, squidy?