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It all started here...
http://green-oval.net/cgi-board.pl/a/thread/49980853

I am now... seriously considering making a really small 5 - 10 minute VN about...

Turbine-Chan...

But... I'm not a very good writer both for story and scenario... think you could share me some ideas?... Not grand ideas... just short ones...

Some screenshots [note - except for Turbine-Chan... the rest of the graphics are placeholders]

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Of course, proper credit will be given to ideas that I'll incorporate...

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>> No.7414157

lol nice, good luck man

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While I already have a rough story layout... the problem is I don't have a way to connect them or rather shameful as it is... I suck as a writer...

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The original Sketch that started this whole thing...

>> No.7414165

http://www.abs-cbnnews.com/business/09/22/10/smuggled-onions-china-seized
http://www.abs-cbnnews.com/business/01/06/11/onion-smuggling-raps-filed-doj
http://www.customs.gov.ph/newsView.php?id=28

Please, ignore the poster known as "mugenjohncel".
He is barely a minor smuggler and black market profiteer who labours under the delusion that he is a great tycoon.
His business is sneaking $200000 of vegetables past customs, deny responsibility and frame colleagues.
Truly, he is a laughable figure.
The state of his country is worrisome.
I would not desire him as a comrade, nor as my friend on the internet.
Please, you will help this board if you never acknowledge him, or reply to him.

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>>7414163
...and a colored one by Notso in the same thread

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Turbine-chan ;_;

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Some improvements...

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Turbine Chan herself...

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>>7414165
lol wat Hey OP, can you smuggle a little girl for me?

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>>7414183
...and her Sisters (Since Turbine's are usually found in Groups in Wind Farms)

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Looking forward to it.

>> No.7414208

>>7414165 you will help this board

> implying this board is not scum in need of punishment

OK mugen, you're best off stealing directly from strike witches since that's the obvious comparison.

Also, in the finest aircraft/monstergirl tradition, refuel her through a port in the top of her head.

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