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Rate my editing work.

>> No.6759006

0/100 nice trips though

>> No.6759007
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Original.
Danbooru Translation i'm working from
http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/775748

>> No.6759022
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>my face when you're version is photochopped

>> No.6759025

>>6759022
>my version is photoshopped
>MY VERSION
>I can see the pixels in yours
>THE PIXELS. THEY ARE HUGE.

>> No.6759026

>>6759025
0/10 go back to pooshlmer

>> No.6759028
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>>6759000

>> No.6759029

>>6759022
smoke weed erryday XD

>> No.6759035

>>6759029
>straight edge faggot
go back to /v/

>> No.6759066
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Got some help. How's this. Any better?

>> No.6759112

That font doesn't look very nice, in my opinion

>> No.6759122

>>6759066
You gotta keep her -ze, fuck the haters

>> No.6759140

The only problem I can see with it is the font choice. You should be using http://www.questie.com/manga/ScanEditGuide/wildwords.zip

>> No.6759144
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>>6759112
Okay a guide recommended Wildwords.
How's it look now?

>> No.6759150

>>6759144
>>6759140
ARE YOU FROM THE FUTURE?

>> No.6759151

>>6759144
Looks good now, except speech bubble 4 which has the text slightly off-center. Should be lower.

>> No.6759155

>>6759144
Looks much better.

>> No.6759159
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>>6759151
perfect?

>> No.6759162

>>6759159
No more complaints. Keep at it!

>> No.6759184

>>6759122
This guy has a point though

>> No.6759226

>>6759159
http://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Potential_comics

If you're interested in editing you might want to look here for things to do.

>> No.6759295
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Second strip. Attempt one.

>> No.6759303

source:
http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/777068/4koma-comic-detached_sleeves-hakurei_reimu-kirisam

>> No.6759311

>>6759295
The text placement is fine, but the text looks kinda rough compared to the one before it. Is it because you saved as JPEG?

>> No.6759315

>>6759311
The source is .jpg it's also lower resolution. Let me try changing it up.

>> No.6759328
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>>6759311
Scaling the image turned out kinda bad, but the font only seems to work properly at 14pt and up.

>> No.6759345

>>6759328
To have better control over the size of the font make sure its size is in pixels not points. Edit -> Preferences -> Units and Rulers.

>> No.6759348

>>6759328
I'm also not sure if you're using anti-aliasing. You should set it to "smooth".

>> No.6759353
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>>6759328
Yah that looks blurry. And maybe the font doesn't work too well at low resolutions?

Also I noticed one other thing, that applies to both images: There's tiny sfx text that's not been done.

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>>6759345
>>6759348
...I guess it's time to switch from paint.net to photoshop!

>> No.6759359

>>6759353
I don't agree with SFX text replacement, it's usually too inside the art. Border notes are a possibility.

>> No.6759380

>>6759359
Captioning is fine too.

>>6759356
Not quite so blocky this time, but:
- Don't scale the image. In fact, touch the source as little as possible.
- The text looks cramped.

>> No.6759411

>>6759380
>The text looks cramped.

Wouldn't be a problem if English could be written vertically, and not look
s
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in lowercase.

>> No.6759425
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I went to Pixiv but it's the same jpg. All the rest of the stuff is in png, so it's an anomaly. This is the best I can do in paint.net, Photoshop CS5 is downloading I'll try again in that. Until then I'll move on to another high-quality source 4koma.

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I lied. Another jpg source. Higher resolution though, I think it turned out much better.

>> No.6759447

>>6759441
I agree, that one's nice.

>> No.6761214
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I made a slight alteration to the image for this one.
http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/761893/2girls-4koma-balance_ball-ball-black_hair-comic-ex

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so moe!

>> No.6761242

>>6761214
When you link to danbooru you can stop at the post number.
http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/761893 works out fine

>> No.6761247

>>6761242
Thank you.

>> No.6761303
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>>6759022
Oh damn I fixed that one a long time ago, heres the updated one.

More surprised anyone had that version, I deleted it out of the original thread when someone mentioned the pixels.

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http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/761325
I might run short of workable 4komas from this artist.

>> No.6761340
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>>6761312
Text bubble one seemed a bit too high.

>> No.6761351

>>6761303
Uhhh... panel 3 has unedited bubble wrap in.

>> No.6761372
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>>6759295
I still think Augie is superior.
Wild works reminds me of bad shounen manga.

>> No.6761385

>>6761372
Wildwords*
What's wrong with me today..

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>>6761351
Ain't that some shit, I really need to clean out this folder.

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>> No.6761514

>>6761504
Well that's quite a bit better than mine...
So changing the text size is okay... interesting.

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>> No.6761577

>>6761528
Who else thought to themselves during the 1st panel "what is she talking about? Orin already has cat-ears"?

>> No.6761602

>>6761577
You're not alone

>> No.6762249

>>6761528
oh god
remilia drinking the blood in the last panel
i'm not sure why i laughed at that

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