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In the illusionary world there lived a solitary dollmaker. While she wasn’t entirely devoid of friends she did spend most of her time inside her small house making dolls. And when she wasn’t making dolls she made doll-clothes, doll-shoes, tools for doll-making… When asked if she prefered the company of dolls to that of living beings she said These dolls are my precious children. My friends are my precious friends. I couldn’t possibly answer that question.

>> No.6628544

I think that's probably the least depressing answer you could expect.

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In the illusionary world there lived a girl who served in large splendid manor. She had been all over the world serving the master of the household, and finally they had setteled here. When asked if she ever longed to return to her home country she said Of course I do. But this is land is still young, especially when compared to the four thousand years of Chinese history. Despite that it has treated us so well. Wouldn’t it be a pity to not see it grow?

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In the illusionary world there lived a girl who tended a huge and most gorgeous garden. She was young and she was not nessesairily talented or experinced. Yet she worked hard long hours every day in the garden. When asked if she worked so hard because she loved gardening she smiled softly and said No.

>> No.6628566

What's the illusionary world?

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In the illusionary world there lived a beautiful shinigami. She had an imposing figure but she was truly calm and kind-hearted. And despite being a shinigami she was rarely ever working seriously, and when she was she always took her sweet time. When asked if she really thought the line of work suited her she said Well, yes. I mean, the dead have already gone out of time, haven’t they?

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In the illusionary world there lived an ancient god. She lived atop the highest mountain in the middle of the land. Everyday she watched over the creatures of the land go about their lives. Once upon a time she had been the proud ruler of grand country. When asked if she had any regrets she said Yes, I do. But isn’t that fine? I have no plans of dissapearing any time soon.

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In heaven far above the illusionary world there lived a selfish celestial. Despite bing a celestial she was just an immature little girl. Everyday she threw tantrums that literarily shook the earth below. Everyday she got into fights, everyday she caused trouble for others. When asked if she ever felt any remorse for leading this kind of lifestyle, she said nothing, because she hadn’t been listening.

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In the illusionary world there lived a tiny mouse. Though she was small she was sharp like few, and she served diligently in a Buddhist temple. It was said that given she had a proper descrition of what she was looking for, she could find anything, whatever it might be. Where ever she went she had a proud and content look on her face. When asked if it was her ability that made it so she said Ha,you truly are an idiot, aren’t you?

>> No.6628609

>>6628592
Goddamn it Tenshi.

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In the illusionary world there lived a red and white shrine maiden. She spent most of her days as slowly as possible, sitting and silently drinking tea and not moving about unless she absolutely needed to. She never went out of her way to meet with others, but neither did she go out of her way to avoid them. When asked if she shouldn’t try to go out and hunt some youkai she said Why should I?It’s not like I have to come to them.They come here everyday wheter I want it or not.

>> No.6628627

Where are you stealing these from?

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In the real world there lived a girl who dreamt of the illusionary world. She was a dreamer, and she was naïve; she was the kind who would belive almost just about anything. When asked if she seriously believed that the illusionary world actually existed she looked confused and at first she didn’t say anything. Then she asked What? What do you mean?

>> No.6628634

>>6628627
Wrote them myself just now. Couldn't think of anything better to do with them.

Also done. I hope you guys didn't mind.

>> No.6628646

>>6628634
Write more.

Now.

>> No.6628649

I liked it, thanks

>> No.6628671

More please, I wish one of Sanae-waifu please. None of those silly slut meme's please.

>> No.6628676

I'm not sure what's going on but I like it.

>> No.6628690

>>6628634
You ignored everyone in the Komeiji family.

>> No.6628715

Op here. I don't think I'll write anymore today because I have other things to do, but it's nice to hear you guys liked it. I'll take into consideration making more at a later time.

I haven't written seriously (Touhou or otherwise) for more than a year so this felt like warm-up.

>>6628690
I tried to come up with at least one for all the main games, but I couldn't think of anything for SA or IaMP. I'm sorry ;_;

>> No.6628739

>>6628715
This was nice. You covered 4 of my 5 favorite characters too. Hope to see you write more in the future.

>> No.6628744

Surprisingly enough that was really nice, good job. Please write more OP.

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>>6628715
It's not me you should be apologizing to.

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>>6628557
yeah nah

>> No.6629064

>>6628761
>>6628690
>>6628671
Oh, fuck it, I might as well. One Sanae and one Koishi coming right up. I had dinner and came up with some ideas.

Just give me a second.

>> No.6629101 [DELETED] 

In the illusionary world there lived a high school student. However, nowadays she was usually refered to as a living god. But as the faith in her grew and the shrine where she lived prospehered she became more known as simply a god. When asked if she though that she wasn’t taking out things in advance she laughed and said Are you questioning my divinity? As mortal, you apparently don’t know any better. The concept of divinity is all about belief.

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In the illusionary world there lived a high school student. Nowadays she was usually refered to as a living god. But as the faith in her grew and the shrine where she lived prospehered she became more known as simply a god. When asked if she though that she wasn’t taking out thing in advance she laughed and said Are you questioning my divinity? As mortal, you apparently don’t know any better. The concept of divinity is all about belief.

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In the depths of old hell far below the illusionary world there lived a satori. Having closed her third eye she had lost what she had in common with the rest of her kin. How useless! Her elder sister cried and mourned for her loss. But, when asked if she herself felt any loss she said Not really. I’m still here aren’t I?

>> No.6629141

>>6628744

Nobody cares about your opinion.

>> No.6629151

This thread is good and you should feel good.

>> No.6629157

You sound like people would care about YOUR opinion instead. Making your post totally useless and ridiculous, take it easy anon, don't ruin this thread.

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This is pretty good. If you're not too busy, can you make one for my old lady?

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I like it.

>> No.6629167

>>6629157
Directed obviously at >>6629141


Now back to the thread: This is going pretty well, OP. I can feel a "ZUNish" touch on it. Keep it up.

>> No.6629176

>>6629109
Why did I read Are you questioning my divinity? as Are you questioning my virginity?

>> No.6629177

>>6629157
>totally useless and ridiculous.

Just like every post you make QC, anyway, no more drama in this thread.

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Hey OP, can you add Reisen to your list too please? I'm curious about what would you make up for her.
>>6629177
Too bad you can't see when I'm actually posting. I would gladly delete my posts and clean this thread if you agree to do the same, but I'm afraid your pride is just too much.

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>>6629167
>I can feel a "ZUNish" touch on it. Keep it up.

OP just needs a few more beers to get that "authentic" touch.

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In the illusionary world there lived an ice fairy. Although she was the strongest of her kind, she still lost constantly to humans and youkai more powerful than any fairy. "Next time, next time, I'll show you!" When asked if she was ever discouraged by her defeats she said Who wouldn't be? Even I have pride, you know? But one fight is just one fight. I'll definitely beat them the next time. Because I'm the strongest, after all.

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Op here. This was pretty fun. I can't promise that I'll finish before I go to bed, but I'll do my best to think of something for the requests. Writing these only take a few minutes but coming up with an idea takes longer.

>>6629246
I just noticed there's a bunch of typos everywhere. I wonder if that's drunk enough.

>>6629176
Because ........ ;_;

Also, thank you all for your kind words.

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In the illusionary world there lived an ice fairy. Although she was the strongest of her kind, she still lost constantly to humans and youkai who were more dangerous still. "Next time, next time, I'll show you!" When asked if she was ever discouraged by her defeats she said Who wouldn't be? Even I have pride, you know? But one fight is just one fight. I'll definitely beat them the next time. Because I'm the strongest, after all.

>> No.6629271

I feel like these would be worse without the spoiler tags and can't figure out why.

>> No.6629275

Best thread I've seen on /jp/ recently after that Japanese vintage subway poster thread.

>> No.6629278

>>6629246
Hahah yeah.

As for the anon the just posted his own Cirno version. It wasn't bad, but you should substitute her accepting losing like that and add something like "They got lucky, that's all!"

>> No.6629286

>>6629176
You are corrupted.

>> No.6629317

You write pretty well OP...Hoping to read more from you

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>>6629267

These are awesome op, most quality thread I've seen in a long time.

Would you be willing to write one up for Mima?

>> No.6629421

>>6629407
How is anyone supposed to ask her anything? She's dead.

>> No.6629438

>>6629109
Not bad at all. Well done OP.

>> No.6629453

>When asked if she though that she wasn’t taking out thing in advance
I don't really understand this.

>> No.6629479

>>6629453
Taking out an advance is basically spending money before you have it. If you get your pay in a month you can take out a cash advance and buy things now for a small fee. If your expected source of income falls through you'll be in trouble, though, which is why it's not always a great idea.

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In the illusionary world there lived a lunar rabbit. She had abandoned her friends at a critical time and selfishly fled her home in fear. She was lucky enough to be taken in by people similar to her, and she lead a good life with her head held high. When asked if she thought that she deserved this second chance at life she said No, in my heart I still feel very guilty. ...But I cannot waste this chance; I met a lucky rabbit.

>> No.6629615

>>6629592
Oh nice! Thanks.

>> No.6629638

It's like I'm really grossly invading Touhous' comfort zone.

>> No.6629687

In the illusionary world there lived an Ice Fairy. She spends most of her time freezing frogs. Although she isn't the smartest Fairy in the land she is very endearing. She made lots of friends, and became very popular. When asked how old she was she said There are no busses in Gensokyo.

>> No.6629706

>>6629687
Ah yes, always someone to take a shit on good things. As always.

>> No.6629721

>>6629615
No prob. I'll be taking on Byakuren and Mimanext. That might take another while though.

>> No.6629771

>>6629721
Alright. "lucky rabbit" was well thought of you, thanks again. I'm looking forward for the Mima one, she has a lot of "potential".

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Between the illusionary world and ???, there lived a capricious woman of questionable origins. Calamity or calm, she appeared and disappeared without reason or logic, weaving a strange web of actions. When asked whether she was strong or weak, sane or crazed, and whether she had won or lost, she said If you ask a question with such distinct choices Then I can only say your answer is somewhere in between each And possibly nowhere at all.

>> No.6629926

>>6629889
*clap clap clap*

>> No.6629952

>>6629889
Ah, sounds just like Yukari.

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In the illusionary world there lived a hard working buddhist monk. Despite the fact that she was a monk she had experienced many vile things. She had been humiliated and treated horribly. Despite this she was mild like a spring breeze, despite this she was happy to forgive any wrong doing or ill will. When asked how she could uphold such virtue she said Tolerance is key. Tolerance towards difference,tolerance towards hate.As is, tolerance towards intolerence.

>> No.6630025

>>6629889
Op here, I don't want to take credit for anyone else's work so I'll just say I didn't write this. I probably would have tackled Yukari very differently in this format, but I still like what you did. The final part was very nice.

Oh, and it gave me the idea that if I did write Yukari, wouldn't it be nice to start of with

>Somewhere in between nowhere and everywhere there lived a great youkai.

or something.

>> No.6630064

>>6630025
>Somewhere between everywhere and nowhere

Not bad. "Great youkai" is a little vague for her, though. I did the best I could with what little time I have to spare. The rest was verbose enough, as it was, so a simple opening was what I was going for.

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In the illusionary world there had once lived a great and respected magician. She had made herself a famous and feared name, but alas, all good things must come to an end. She left behind one lucky apprentice. She had once been asked to comment on this student of hers, and at that time, she said She’s headstrong, but kinda useless. My training will do her good. Spoiling a talented girl with my genius would be like grinding a diamond to dust.

>> No.6630204

>>6630191

Awesome

>> No.6630207

The newer ones aren't as good as the first few.

>> No.6630212

>>6630191
I dislike this insinuation of Mima being dead (not in the spirit/soul/ghost sense)

>> No.6630217

>>6630204
I had really fun with Mima for some reason. I wanted to portray her as Marisa's proud teacher, and I think I managed.

Byakuren was really hard, the hardest of the entire bunch by far. Listening to some Cosmic Mind really helped though.

I'll be going to bed now, but if any of you feel like it leave some requests and I'll see to them in the morning. I had really fun in this thread, so I wouldn't mind writing more.

>> No.6630246

I want to see Rumia done. She's such a little NEET; I can't imagine hers being uplifting.

>> No.6630251

>>6630207
That might be because when I wrote the first ones I had an idea first. When I did the requests I had to start with a character and after that make up an idea... I also spent a bit more time on the first ones, but only marginally.

>>6630212
I wanted to use it more as a play on the fact that she's no longer an active character in the series, rather than being "dead".

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>>6632502
I'll give it a try.
In a mansion near the illusionary world there lived an ailing magician. Anemic and athsmatic, shut-in by choice, she carries out her research in the expansive library accompanied by her familiar. When asked if she ever gets lonely or pines for the outdoors, she said These books are friends that I care for and sunlight fades the text rather quickly. A book that cannot be read is basically unwritten. It would not make sense to kill a friend would it?

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>>6629268

I really liked this one.

Also, saved the quotes here: http://pastebin.com/heCpueC4

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Hello, Op here. I don't know if there's still any interest in this thread but I'm back nonetheless. I was going to post earlier but seeing the state of the front page I decided to wait a bit.

I have some new stuff I might as well post, and I'll be getting to the requests later. Not sure if I'm supposed to interpret >>6632502 >>6632363 as requests but I might as well.

>>6632714
That was nice, thanks for the contribution! I'm going to try Patchy in a while too, hopefully I'll be able to come up with something good, too.

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In the illusionary world there lived a girl who watched ceaselessly for intruders. From her vantage point she could see the length and breadth of the land, every act, every petty cruelty and every tender moment, each momentous event and each second of everyday life. When asked what she saw she said Stop bugging me for stories, Aya. I'm on duty at the moment.

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In the illusionary world there lived a genius pharmacist. She had come from the moon, and having lived for a several millennia she was unlike any other of her profession. It was said there was no drug she could not make. When asked if this was true she said No. The only drug I cannot make, is the one I have yet to think of.

>> No.6634367

>>6634351
This was really nice. Good job. Unexpected, but still spot on.

>> No.6634376

>>6634367
Well, who else would be asking all these questions? Maybe Akyuu. Hatate wouldn't leave home, though. It just makes sense.

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In the illusionary world there lived a proud god of war. It had not been very long since she first settled in the illusionary world, but she had already made quite the reputation, she had already conquered a fine piece of land. When asked if there was anyone she wanted to credit for her success she said I do want to thank my family.But the one I really want to thank is myself, for holding them close.

>> No.6634399

>>6634376
I have actually never imagined there as being a specific person asking, but you make a good point. It works very well, regardless.

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In the real world there lived a girl who claimed to know everything. Though she was quite confident in her claim, such a thing is so absurd, even the oldest and wisest of her world wouldn’t dare to claim it. And thus, no-one believed her, that is, except for one person. When asked what kind of person this was she said Oh, she’s just a naïve girl; the kind who would believe almost just about anything.

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6634424

These little description things are really, really well written.
It's like ZUN himself is writing these up.
Could you do Okuu & Orin if you please?

>> No.6634435

>>6628557

Is this a real one? If not I'd like to see a proper Youmu one.

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>>6634424
I'll add them to the requests list. I'm working on all undone requests so far, but I actually have to leave in a bit. If you're lucky maybe some other anon will come around and do them.

Oh and uh, it makes me feel kinda uncomfortable that people are posting things in here in this format without a name. I'm very happy that people are contributing but I really don't want to take credits for other people's good work. I'll be using OP in this thread at all times from now on, just in case....

>> No.6634447

>>6634435
She doesn't love gardening. But she loves her duty to Yuyuko.

Nothing else needs to be said.

>> No.6634454

>>6634435
It's real... The original idea was an idea I had for a full-length one-shot, but I used it here because I though it suited the format. I probably won't write another Youmu because I'm content with this one. But of course, anyone else is happily allowed to write another Youmu one if they want too.

>> No.6634510

In the illusionary world there lived a half-human half-youkai who lived amongst piles of junk carefully sifted and sorted and shelved. From all over the land, people stronger than him came and took whatever they pleased from him, giving only pittance in exchange. When asked how he made a profit, he said I don't. But the artifacts, they must be identified. Even a half-youkai will sicken and die if they don't use their power. And the artifacts, too, would be sad.

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>>6634510

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Okay, I'm back for now. I'll post Keine >>6632363 and Patchouli >>6632502 in a moment. Rumia >>6630246 was harder than expected, so still working on that.

Also, an extra.

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In the illusionary world there lived a girl who was friends with a vampire. She and the vampire didn’t have many interests in common, and their personalities were very different. Yet one could often see them during tea-time, smiling togther. When the girl was asked why she had such an unlikely friend she said The vampire promisedshe would give me everything I wished for if I promised to became her friend. I am just fulfilling my part of the bargain. Why not enjoy myself in the meantime?

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In the illusionary world there there lived a half beast who loved the humans. She lived and worked in the human village protecting them, teaching them and keeping the records of their history. When asked why she found it so important to record the brief lives of such fragile creatures she said All time is precious, be it brief or eternal.

>> No.6635059

I can barely squash the urges to argue over whether these fit the character.

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>>6635059
Argue all you want, but to be honest I'm not really that interested. Not to be rude, but it's impossible to write something every single Touhou fan would agree on anyway, and I'm a bit tired of arguing back and forth over character portrayal that and character interpretation this. I did what I felt was right when I wrote them, and that's all there is to it...

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>>6629271

In the illusionary world there lived an Anon, reading at his computer. He read flowery stories that stirred his imagination, which helped him paint pictures in his mind that he would probably never see with his eyes. When asked why he thought these spoiler-clad stories were so intriguing, he said Because I look at them and can't help but wonder what will come next

Put in a plainer way, the spoiler tags evoke a sense of anticipation as for just a micro-second you wonder what the character says. After you're already drawn in with a vivid description of the setting, it's easier to get a tiny emotional response, and the spoiler tags serve to make that response one of wonder

>> No.6635119

>>6635108
Well said. These fanon/canon arguments bore me.

>> No.6635138

Try doing one for Rin Satsuki, that would probably be pretty challenging.

>> No.6635143

>>6635108
I know and agree, which is why I'm not arguing. It's better to write my own, but I can't get any of them to sound right.

>> No.6635144

>>6635114
>helped him paint pictures in his mind that he would probably never see with his eyes.
>probably never see with his eyes.

Shut up. You went too far with that, man.

>> No.6635147

>>6635114
>In the illusionary world there lived an Anon
Anon lived in Gensoukyou all this time and he didn't even notice ;_;

>> No.6635152

I don't see the point of this thread - I don't understand what OP is trying to do. Are you trying to make us drift off into Gensokyo by reading your paragraph of fanfiction?

My Cirno one was best, it fit perfectly but was attacked saying I was trying to ruin it - lol angry anon.

>> No.6635154

>>6635147
Your world is nothing but an elaborate construct created by the kappa. Girls are experimenting, please don't compromise their data.

>> No.6635180

>>6635114
I think I understand everything now.

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>>6635143
>>6635119
I'm glad there are others who see it my way. When I used to more actively write Touhou fanfiction shorts I always got dragged into these discussions and I could never really defend myself (if needed) with anything else except saying "I did what I felt was right at the time." My own definition of the Touhous also change all the time. In a few months I might read this thread and wonder what the hell I was doing.

If it helps though, please don't think of these shorts as if they are trying to describe a whole character. What I've done in many cases is that I've taken one characteristic of one character and exaggerated it to create an effect by asking and answering a question. In some cases I really have to disregard some parts of a character's personality in order to get the right affect with such few words. Byakuren is an example where I though this was really hard, since my idea of her is very scattered, muddied and even contradictory. I didn't know what part to focus on.

Not to mention they're mostly though of as theoretical; I doubt most the girls would answer honestly when asked personal questions like this.

tl;dr: It's just fanfiction. Please just try to have fun and not think too hard.

>> No.6635217

>>6635114
I guess there's also the effect where people expect to see did you read you SICP today? or something but get something entirely different instead!

>> No.6635256

>>6635199
I like to aspect off different interpretations. My favorite interpretation might change, but I still have all the others helping ward off OOC feelings.

>> No.6635290

In the real world there lives a solitary lame guy. While he wasn’t entirely devoid of goodness he did spend most of his time inside his basement making terrible threads on 4chan. And when he wasn’t making terrible threads he thought of ways to make even worse threads… He came up with fanfiction.

had to be done

>> No.6635494

>>6635290
You make a good point. I might manage to enjoy visiting /jp/ if there were more people posting neat stories like this.

>> No.6635651

Your creativity will lead you to greatness, OP, and probably into gensokyo as well. Tell Reimu I'd her donation box while you are there, ok?

>> No.6635662

>>6635651
Why you have to make these fucking shitty posts? Don't come here plaguing this thread.

>> No.6635662,1 [INTERNAL] 

>>6635662
Tell the same to
>>6635114
while you are at it.
Lets turn this thread into one big flamewar. people we don't like are not allowed to post on threads we like.

And please, keep the flaming to easy modo.

>> No.6635678

>>6635662
>>6629141
Do keep those kind of comments in their designed place- meta threads and easy modo.

>> No.6635703

>>6635678
Keep shitty posts outside anywhere.

>> No.6635741
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I probably won't be writing anymore tonight, I'm feeling kinda drained since today has been pretty busy. Feel free to post whatever you want here, but I can't say for sure that I'll be back tomorrow. I'm sorry if I left any of you requesters hanging; I'd still like to finish those I haven't yet but we'll see.

Anyway,

>100+ replies and 40 images hidden

thanks for sticking with me, thanks for all the contribution and feedback. This was my first time doing something like this and it really was fun. I'll definitely want to make a similar thread in the future. Happy Holidays and goodnight /jp/!

>> No.6635741,1 [INTERNAL] 

I can't delete others comments, even if they are shitposts, and at any rate, once posted everything ends up here.

So to you shitposters who try to turn good threads to flamewars: go fuck yourself. and to those who don't know about easy modo, well, I guess I now know why guests from other boards are hated here. I just wish they would just leave never to come back.

>> No.6635757

>>6635741
Goodnight, and thanks for the fictions.

>> No.6635758

>>6635741
Happy Holidays and goodnight to you. Looking forward for more threads like this.

>> No.6635766

>>6635741
wait wait

Australia?

>> No.6635778

>>6635703
I would if I could, but I can't delete your posts.

>> No.6635787

>>6635703
You know very well that I can't stop you from shitposting.
Go back to whatever board you came from, please.

>> No.6635897

>>6635787
The problem is that your posts are disgusting and you can delete them, now excuse me while I head to the ghost board.

>> No.6635787,1 [INTERNAL] 

>>6635741,1
>So to you shitposters who try to turn good threads to flamewars
Your own fault.
>>6635662,1
Oh no, I'll focus on you since that's what you always do, shitpost.

You are the problem, see.

>> No.6635915
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I love you anonymous.

>> No.6635915,1 [INTERNAL] 

>>6635787,1
I was posting an attampt to be humourous. this is by no mean a flamepost. You, however, turned it into a fight. Do you claim to have no will of your own, and that my poor sense of humor obliged you to response with flaming? are you that weak willed? In that case, I'll say that the lack of love from your kind is what pushing me into making those posts, so it's all your fault.
You and your kind are the problem, see.

>>6635897
The problem is that your posts are fucking retarded and you can chose not to post them on the first place. But I appreciate the fact that you are willing to listen to criticism.

>> No.6635915,2 [INTERNAL] 

>>6635915,1
Yeah looks like we just can't settle this.

For me you are the problem and without you and your kind "flame posts" wouldn't exist.

While you defend your posts saying that my reaction is the problem.

>> No.6635915,3 [INTERNAL] 

>>6635915,2
Yes, your reaction is the problem.

You are like a judge saying It's the victim fault that the murderer killed him. Yes, the reason for the murder came partially from the victim, but it was ultimately your call if to try to correct my ways with constructive criticism or by flaming.

You chose flaming. Your choice. Your fault.

Also:
I post what I see fit. you however, knew that your post is fucking flame and yet you posted it anyway. Who is the shitposter now?

>> No.6635915,4 [INTERNAL] 

>>6635915,3
>I post what I see fit. you however, knew that your post is fucking flame
Use this part of your own post as a reply.

>> No.6637923

In the illusory world lived a girl, unnamed. She was seen with a half-hearted chap, and was known for her love of books that she had been so cruelly deprived of. When asked what stories she read, she replied It's not what the words spell out that's important; It's what the books taste like. They taste delicious.

>> No.6637982

>>6635787
No, you do that. No matter how long you make your childish posts here, you'll still be seen as a nuisance newcomer by those who have been here much longer than you.

>> No.6637990
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In the grim darkness of the far future, there lived legions of blood-hungry warriors. They fought without respite, seeking not victory or advantage, but merely a growing body count. When asked what they hoped to gain from such senseless death, one merely said MAIM! KILL! BURN! MAIM! KILL! BURN!

>> No.6637990,1 [INTERNAL] 

>>6635915,4
I post what I dim to be good posts. you post what you think are good posts? you think flames are good?

>> No.6639347 [SPOILER] 
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In a world that had already ended there lived a beautiful doll. She lived with a master who was very demanding, always sending her out on errands and chores, all of which she would accept unquestioningly with grace. Once, she was asked whether she ever thought with her own head. She laughed at the question, and said Sometimes. But usually, I think with my heart.Most of my cognitive functions are there.

>> No.6639577
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In an illusionary world there lived a girl who lived to see every day forever. She lived as a solitary crimson watchguard in a desolate bamboo forest. When not rescuing lost people, she'd ponder about her life. When asked what it is she'd most want, she'd say "I'm just a health nut that runs a yakitori stand."

>> No.6639577,1 [INTERNAL] 

These are some pretty neat short writings on character insights.
Thanks for this, OP and the other contributors.

>>6635114
Although a meta post, this is equally well done in the same style as the others, anon. Good job.

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In the illusionary world the girl was not present; even in a world which accepted all, she did not exist. She was not asked anything, but she said her story through her music, playing an ancient tune to an unknown audience. She plays here still.

>> No.6640525,1 [INTERNAL] 

Christmas edition of this thread would be awesome.

>> No.6640525,2 [INTERNAL] 

Tag: short writings

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