/jp/ - Otaku Culture

[Anonymous No.]

Hey /jp/, if I released a VN that my small yet somewhat talented group has made with ren;py(it has taken us around 3 years to get it finished), would you play it and give honest opinions about how it is?

[White Ren !YLuFFdRcFQ No.]

There are no honest oppinions here.
There is only hate.
No fun allowed.
Get out KS devs.

[Anonymous No.]

It depends, is it any fan fiction of another person's work?

[Anonymous No.]

Yes, provide a link

[Anonymous No.]

As a VN virgin, I don't know how much that would mean, but, sure.

[Anonymous No.]

It's shit.

Okay, fine, but give me a genre, estimated length, and maybe a brief setting before I honestly consider it.

[Anonymous No.]

No, Losstarot, your group is not talented.

[ZUN !barYV1VtIA No.]

Yes, if you actually finish it. I love indie games.

[Anonymous No.]

Come back when you can beat that

[Necrobrotent No.]

Only if its terrible fantasy or sci fi.

I've had enough realism this week.

[Anonymous No.]

>Dandy Girl
"It's shit, the writing blows."

>Katawa Shoujo
"It's shit, leave KS devs, etc."

[Anonymous No.]

I'd play it. Not like I have anything better to do.

But you better be willing to take harsh criticism. If not, then don't even bother.

[Anonymous No.]

Well, I'll provide a link as soon as it's finished and tested, but it's close.

All I can say is that it's a somewhat psychological thriller set in a modern day city featuring a man in his 30s.

Also, I am neither a KS dev or anyone else.

[Anonymous No.]

Are you going to provide a download link or not? I'm always thinking about making a VN and I would like to see your work.

[Anonymous No.]

>my small yet somewhat talented group
Whatever you say.

>ren;py
Oh boy!

>would you play it and give honest opinions about how it is
Yes, I would.

[Anonymous No.]

>>5836648
>man in his 30s
Really stepping the boundaries of VN tradition, I see.

[Anonymous No.]

>>5836658
You would read a VN with Kinzo as the MC.

[Anonymous No.]

>>5836703
Perhaps.

All I meant was, y'know, typical VNs have very young protags. I'm sure exceptions exist, but that seems to largely be the case.

[Anonymous No.]

>>5836658

I'm making a VN about a sperm stuck in a vagoo. The sperm has to help his wad advance past the other wads in the nooks and crannies of the vagoo, and then betraying utterly all of the other sperms in his wad so that he may reach the golden land of the egg. It's going to be a dense psychological military drama. If it does well I'll make a tactics game out of it. Of course, the spermatoza will be anthropomorphized except for in "dream" sequences that are actually reality.

One of the BAD ENDS is you are in a butt and instead of an egg you dive into turd and die writhing in shit.

[Anonymous No.]

>>5836731
Certainly sounds interesting enough.

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

>>5836731
I don't usually like retroactive plot branches, but for that bad end, I'll make an exception.

[Anonymous No.]

I would certainly play it. Just give us more details about it. More than you already did, that is.

[Anonymous No.]

>>5836591
> my small
20 is not small

> somewhat talented group
4LS ruled out right there

> get it finished
4LS completely ruled out

[Anonymous No.]

>>5836744

Well, how does a wad of sperm, let alone a single spermatoza, know where it is? The trick is that to get that end you have to make a ton of wrong choices and then at the right branch, you start making all the right ones. It's a special ending, really. But if you make the wrong choice at the crucial point, you get a more standard bad ending.

[Anonymous No.]

Just tell me when it's done.